Reviews for Childhood on Veldin
PinkSaphira chapter 2 . 5/8/2016
An epilogue comes at the end of a story, so I think you should change the title to prologue, which is at the beginning of a story.
Seijax chapter 6 . 11/10/2012
I like Miss Spinster, too!

"Look! A Leviathan!"

And then she knocked the blender off the counter.

"It broke again."

Oh, man, I laughed so hard at that XD.

Good to see poor little Ratchet (don't you just want to hug him sometime?) has a good influence in his life.

Soooo...are you gonna do more?
WrenchWielder chapter 6 . 10/22/2012
I like this, kinda interesting to think about. Can't wait for the next chapter
Wolfi Nightshade chapter 6 . 10/16/2012
Oh my gosh! This is great! I'm waiting (not so patiently) for the next update. I really, really hope it comes soon! TTFN! :)
YellowDizzyLombax chapter 6 . 10/15/2012
Aww, I like Miss Spinster, she is very nice and funny. Keep up the great work and can't wait to see more chapters! :D
JeweledRaven chapter 6 . 10/13/2012
Awesome story! Cant wait for the next chapter!
Dreams Come True 996 chapter 4 . 10/10/2012
Write the enxt chapters, please, but don't forget about some breaks. OK?
I'm patient enough, so don't hurry that way;)!
Guest chapter 2 . 10/7/2012
you are a beutiful person for making this
Dreams Come True 996 chapter 3 . 10/9/2012
Poor Ratchy:(
Those bullies weren't so nice for him. I really pity him. I don't know howhis childhood was, but I think I know how he felt.
I was bullied at school, too. And i know how it is when some jerk is teasing you or your friends. When I see something like that, the onlt things I feel are anger, sadness and compassion.
SpaceCat97 chapter 3 . 10/9/2012
We feel so sorry for Ratchet, don't we Foenix?
(Yeah, whatever. *goes back to playing Tools of Destruction*)
I don't think she'll ever stop playing that game.
Anywho, continue this! I like it, even though it so far has only two chapters! Please update soon, like today maybe? Please? :)
Dreams Come True 996 chapter 2 . 10/7/2012
Oh, please, continue the writing of the next chapters!
I'm curious about Ratchet's childhood so muchXD!
I'm patient enough, so don't worry;p!
Good luck and have a good time;)!