|Reviews for Rescue Mission|
| ArwenGranger chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Poor Sirius, all cooped up when he just wants to help. Don't you just wish he'd stayed at Grimmauld Place though.
| yellow 14 chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Nicely done. Keep writing
| Fire The Canon chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
I loved Sirius in this. I think his reaction was very in character and also quite amusing. This is almost the worst part of the whole HP series for me. Sirius being my favourite character and what not... I don't cope too well when I reread OotP :P
This was quite enjoyable too. It moved along nicely, which was good. Well done.
| DobbyLovesSocks chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Aww! And then... HE DIES! I hate that part... only part of the entire series where I was fighting back tears- after Sirius dies. It's a good plot, strong vocabulary, you just have a few spelling errors with the homophones. For example, in paragraph 1 "I shouldn't be taken it out on you. I guess where both fugitives..." taken should be taking, and where should be we're. In the paragraph where Sirius is screwing Dumbledore (love that, by the way!) it says "...he could not loose Harry" you meant "lose" instead of loose. Other than those few errors, great job!