|Reviews for Free Four: the full story|
| Charlie chapter 12 . 7/8
I always wondered how four felt when she held his hand!
| Mikayla chapter 5 . 7/8
I love it so much! I read the divergent book and I couldn’t stop! This gives me a whole new perspective on how it was. I love hearing what Tobias thinks!
| Guest chapter 14 . 7/6
could you allow a bookmark on this, please.
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/6
this is amazing, good job
| Guest chapter 4 . 7/6
| Kara chapter 6 . 7/3
thx for posting.
| hdhw xdwnjw chapter 20 . 5/12
Hi are you still writng these, email me
| Maria chapter 22 . 4/10
There are quite a few spelling errors and I think to avoid this you should spell check your work you also seem to cut off words and judging from the grammar, which doesn't seem correct, you are not English
| Maria chapter 17 . 4/10
I find that some of your wording is not exactly professional and so I feel like Four wouldn't think like that, because Veronica Roth has already written these chapters I think you ought to analyse the way she writes and try to match your writing style and choice of language as close as possible to it as you can.
Other than that I think you have done well trying to complete the book
Also I think you make Tris seem a little too childlike
| Feed Back chapter 29 . 3/19
Really good book! There are very few chinks in the story. Better than anything I could have done. I recommend reading Four: a divergent collection to help you make it more professional. Its a great story and I really enjoyed reading it.
| Guest chapter 14 . 2/7
| lola chapter 15 . 1/22
i love how he expresses his self cause in divergent he is realy tough
| lola chapter 12 . 1/22
this is my favriot part were he is the hero
| Guest chapter 9 . 1/22
i love this book
| Anaya chapter 29 . 1/7
Your story is actually really, really good. The only tip I have for is...it's not that it really matters...but, I think you works at bit more or maybe re-check you spelling and punctution errors. Don't get me wrong, though! I liked you story a lot. :-)