|Reviews for Black Cat|
| canarycup chapter 4 . 11/8/2013
You read the Hellboy screenplay didn't you. Honestly it's better than the movie, good choice.
| Wolf and Leopard chapter 1 . 4/11/2013
Alright, so I'd like to start out by saying that what your one rude reviewer said is complete and utter BS. I love this story and I love you Oc. Yes, I wish that you had expanded on the relationship between her and Abe, but that's just a personal opinion of mine. Don't worry about what that other reviewer said because your a great writer and I would love to read more of Noel's adventures. I just hope you continue to write such great fiction in the future. A story like this deserves far more and better reviews.
The Wolf from Wolf and Leopard
| Benji-0310 chapter 17 . 3/14/2013
This has been a good story. I really wished there was more! I hope that there will be a sequal in the future. I'd love to see how Noel would be in the second movie. :)
| Nora.Yaoi.93 chapter 17 . 2/26/2013
Es genial pero creo que le falta algo al final
| Chrysti Doofenshmirtz chapter 17 . 1/26/2013
Update, Update, Update.
| Anti-Carly chapter 17 . 1/11/2013
I really enjoyed this one, I like how you put yourself into the plot, I found it a cute ploy. :D
| camierose chapter 17 . 12/25/2012
aww so cool :)
| DeadlyWriter chapter 17 . 11/28/2012
Love this storry but you really need to make another one for the seconds movie. The're wasn't really much about Abe and your oc togetehr
| TheRabidWriter chapter 3 . 10/10/2012
God how do I put this?
People don't want to read stories about Cat hybrids anymore. It's overdone, old-hat, boring, and ever since the Hellboy fandom has for some reason been like, the number one creature besides Werewolves and Vampires.
Your character has been placed into the original plotline of the first movie, which is a type of Mary Sue.
Definition: A sue who tags along with the group of characters or plot line, and either interrupts the original story, or serves no purpose. These characters can be seen as annoying and are, again, one of the most common types of sues. They tag along with the main group of characters simply because the author wants them to be involved in it all. However, these characters do not always serve a strong relevance, and the plot line could move on easily without them.
-From the Official Mary Sue Catalouge-
There you have it.
It seems like you add extra stuff into the story that doesn't need to be there, like in this chapter, Abe getting experimented on.
Proffesor Broom clearly states that they discovered Abe and named him after Abraham Lincoln because of the date on his seal. From then on Proffessor Broom took care of him.
Why would he name anything that was going to be experimented, and furthermore, why would Broom even allow that to happen at the time? He was the head of the BPRD back then, not Manning.
An Abe is also older than Hellboy.
Please, reconsider changing this story or something. There's a reason no one has reviewed..
I hate to be harsh but it's true.