Reviews for Amusement Park
lolitathegoddessorca860 chapter 1 . 1/20
SinGrin chapter 1 . 7/9/2013
The dialogue was good and overall there wasn't anything wrong with this story. But it feels like you could have gone into more detail about the mood and the atmosphere. Right now they don't really feel like fully developed characters with emotions, fears or affections and more like actors reading over a script. I'd suggest going more into depth in the future.
Bloom Flower chapter 1 . 6/17/2013
Cute! Sequel?
XxShota-FujoshixX chapter 1 . 2/3/2013
... *thumbs up* GREAT!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
i liked this, it was cute
Guest chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
aww seiji is so sweet!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
aww this was so cute