Reviews for Time Vigilante
F1nal Front1er chapter 19 . 3/25/2013
Still enjoying the story, but I think you need to pay a little more attention to the flow of your sentences. The last line in particular doesn't make sense and this one...

"It's okay, I just wanted to be accepted maybe have a family one day."

...is obviously a run-on. If you feel like it's a good idea, I could beta read this story for you.
NightWish234 chapter 19 . 3/18/2013
Awesome story I like how Danny sends chalice back in time and how clockwork and Danny have grown closer, yet you don't mention how he goes from toddler, to teen, to adult, to old and then back through again which, in my opinion is a big part of his character so ya that and update soon!
Guest chapter 7 . 2/22/2013
dont use cuse words
icequeen3125 chapter 18 . 2/22/2013
she fights the box ghost really funny but really
ProudDrakester chapter 18 . 2/22/2013
Excellent chapter. I love the series so far. I wonder when Chalice is going to get her memory back. And the episode is Parental Bonding, the second episode of season 1 on Danny Phantom
Blak-Ice chapter 18 . 2/22/2013
Her dreams is a foreshadowing of Aargon showing up, and the episode of which you speak is called "Parental Bonding". But it actuality, it was just a production error. Happens all the time. In the episode "Kindred Spirits", if you look at Danielle when the "boo-merang" comes in and hits Vlad, as it face to the ground, you can see that her lips disappear and she only has teeth; I only noticed it because all the girls constantly have lips or lipstick to make them more noticeable in the show. Lol
F1nal Front1er chapter 17 . 2/18/2013
Well, at least Danny cleared everything up before leaving for his trip. It was the easy way out for him, but what will happen when Valerie accepts the truth? This is getting interesting again.
Blak-Ice chapter 17 . 2/14/2013
Not really much she can do. I mean, Vlad's not around to get his butt kicked, and I'm pretty sure she's not gonna take it out on Danielle. Danny, I can see, but not Danielle. Though it was pretty funny when Danielle waved and said "Bye Mom". Lol
icequeen3125 chapter 15 . 2/5/2013
ok this is really good so i was wounding could there b another one soon plz plz plz plzzzzz
Zinnia99 chapter 15 . 2/5/2013
Nice chapter. I can't wait for the update.
ProudDrakester chapter 14 . 1/27/2013
Well, bye Danny. See you on the other side, once Sam hears that Valerie is Dani's mother.
pir84lyf chapter 14 . 1/27/2013
valerie is a mother? oh no
Kurami Smile Slayer chapter 14 . 1/26/2013
Oh snap! Danny is SO screwed!
Blackcurse11 chapter 14 . 1/26/2013
NO,NO,NO,NO,NO! ME NO LIKEY ANYMORE! TOO MUCH PAIN! IT'S THE PAIN! T-T
Blak-Ice chapter 14 . 1/26/2013
Well...that's different...lol. wasn't expecting her mom to be Valerie...Sam's really gonna be please now. lol
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