|Reviews for Just like a winter night|
| ABundleOfDaydreams chapter 1 . 3/20/2013
| Jdjd chapter 1 . 3/6/2013
This broke my heart :(((
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
I love it! Very heartwarming! 3
| anonymous chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
hi. i'm the same person who reviewed first. i just wanted to make sure that you know that even though i emphasized things that could have been improved, i like your style of writing. keep it up!
| Asuka-mangalover chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
Wow, you are a great writer, you describe it all in the most beautiful and unusual way. especially when Sho discloses Kyoko.
Thank you for writing this, it warms my heart.
| anonymous chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Well...for one, it doesn't really make any sense. If Kyoko was so pure, she wouldn't be drinking consciously. And Sho is not mature enough to be having these thoughts. At this point, he's probably still thinking "she is my slave" not "she has a heart made out of snow"
"create their own world, away from the inn and all of the rules there" ...kyoko went to Corn in the forest. that was pretty much her other world. and ya...its just rather very OC
you have a good idea going here. but its better in a very OC context. for example, instead of staying pure kyoko "faces reality" and does impulsive things from then on...and then going on to putting them into the context when they're already in tokyo but sho is just starting and he hasn't really found anyone who's going to take him in. well, but sho has to be this observant from the beginning. so thats also very different. anyway. i thought i should just tell you all this ;p
(if you can't tell already, i'm not that big of a fan of OCness...but if its put in the right context, great!)