|Reviews for Conversations: Jintan and Anaru|
| Guest chapter 1 . 2/1
Jesus Christ that was good gets me even
more pumped to see the movie this week!
| Anaru Lover chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
Okay, I absolutely LOVE THIS! A great fanfic, I usually can't find writing like this, especially for AnoHana, but I'm sooooo happy you did just that :D
Once I started, I couldn't stop!
You are an excellent writer, jus' saying. THANK YOU SO VERY MUCH FOR THIS PIECE OF WONDERFUL WRITING! Keep it up! :)
| Daze chapter 1 . 10/10/2013
I ship these two SO HARD. This was a wonderful read.
| Kaleopolitus chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
This is good.
A bit sappy and I found (and consequently lost...) one missing word in a sentence, but you pretty much nailed the two characters..
Despite how well you emulated Anaru and Jintan I still feel like Jintan let go of Menma a bit too... easily. I was expecting a comment like "I can't promise you I'll love you like I love Menma".
Regardless, a really good piece of writing.
| Lanky Nathan chapter 1 . 4/2/2013
That was actually as painful as watching the original anime, and by that I mean the whole stubborness and obliviousness of the characters. Seriously, I was wanting to slap Jintan halfway through this, so solid effort on keeping so well in character.
Very nice overall and I'm glad to have found it )
| Angie chapter 1 . 3/15/2013
I love this anime.i like your fic.
| littlecloudflower chapter 1 . 2/27/2013
That was amazing. I really loved how you made Anaru reconcile with her friends. That was something that had to be addressed.
And Jintan and Anaru's interactions are so real! That point that Anaru made about how she probably was being selfish because what she wanted and what he needed were the same, and how Jintan responded that he thought it was just because she was in love with him...Ah...It's totally the kind of conversation I would have with one of my friends who I'm in love with (and who was avoiding me before I confessed and then friendzoned me...haha, parallels! though I'm glad Anaru and Jintan got together in the end)...; And that part about Anaru reacting about Menma sleeping on his bed was super hilarious. :D
Thanks for writing this! It was a very nice closure to an awesome series!
| ANJELL4evr chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
Ah I love this! I totally ship them too, Lol!
| Saria Forest14 chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
Aw i wish there was more of this T.T its so spot on with the characters and so realistic! I loved it.
| TitanNegro chapter 1 . 11/12/2012
I find ONE FLAW in Ano Hana after reading your fic...it needed a chapter like this,episode 12 epilogue,of them,especially Jin tan,overcoming their traumas,and since the only ones who kinda of didn't by the end was him and Popo,it would have been cool to see the episode focusing on that and by the end that party showed at the ending...
| Elixire J. Crow chapter 1 . 11/11/2012
Definitely incredible story. I just can't stop loving Anaru. Not because her face, or her hot body, or doujin that drawn her so lewdly. But it's just, as a man, I can't imagine how lucky Jintan to have someone who devotely loves him so much like Anaru. Yes it's hard to find one. She do loves him eventhough knew that Jintan can't get over her love for Menma. AnoHana is definitely the best anime in my live.
And also this is such a great fic. I wish you writes the sequel about their relationship. Thank you so much. This fic made my day.
| xcrossfacekillahx chapter 1 . 10/21/2012
I believe Anaru is the one who can make Jintan set Menma aside since he can't live forever with her memory like that. What happened to Menma was a blessing in disguise because Anaru can be with Jintan. Anaru is the one who will give him another reason to live a happy life as said in the story. I'm so happy it happened.
| diellemabelle chapter 1 . 10/20/2012
I am seriously impressed. What a great read! I'm glad that you took the time to iron out the issues both characters would still have after Menma's disappearance. It would be too easy to just say "They realized they love each other" -END. I feel so sorry for Jintan, having read Menma's letter... *tear* So I'm glad that Anaru promised to save him from his endless torment. YAY.
I also like the commentary from their classmates "I totally ship you two" - LOLz
Thanks for writing this!
| Firaea chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Just the minor typos and the like first:
“That was then she found Aki and Haruna” – that was when*/it* was then
“In was the first time they had done so since he returned her handkerchief” – it* was
“Nothing was going the way the wanted” – she*
“They would not worked at the video game store together if not for Menma.” – They would not have*
“What you're experiencing to nothing compared to my pain.” – is* nothing
Such length! I’m actually quite amazed at how capable you are at writing conversation scenes. I’m really bad at those, personally – a 5000-word conversation scene is inconceivable to me, although it didn’t quite feel that long when I read it. In any case, you’re right that this one is indeed significantly better than your other FF. Good that you decided to give some conclusion to Anaru’s friendships as well.
The whole scene is very well-structured and paced, and I’m quite glad you did a lot to show the intensity of Jintan’s internal conflict with regard to Menma – it couldn’t have been any other way, considering how obsessed Jintan was with Menma. Had you failed on that aspect, much of the impact would’ve been lost, so I’m happy you didn’t. Also, I like the fact that Anaru and Jintan got together with… some kind of ambivalence. It wasn’t that Jintan had completely moved on or “lolMenma” by the end, but instead, Anaru has decided to be by his side, to love him and to, in a slow but gradual fashion, help him to move on – by sleeping in his bed, maybe? Sex scene get! (Just kidding )
In spite of that, there’s warmth in the way you’ve depicted them getting together, something which induced a fuzzy kinda feeling in me. Their interaction at the end is very cute and in-character too – I really enjoyed that. It’s almost as if I were reading a canon continuation of Ano Hana.
I skimmed your FF a little to see if I could find anything to pick on, but I can’t find anything at the moment (might be because my head’s half-muddled from fever, though). I’ll be sure to notify you if I think of anything that could be improved upon. Otherwise, that was a really enjoyable read.