Reviews for The Next War
HorseRidersHaveMoreFun chapter 2 . 11/10/2012
I like the idea, but you could really use a beta reader. The first chapter was okay, but the second one, aside from a spacing problem, has a lot of grammar errors and sometimes it looks like you're starting to say one thing. Only then you say something else, but never got rid of what you were going to say at first.
midnightbat chapter 2 . 11/10/2012
omg! Its soooo good!

What happened? Who attacked the riders? What about Kit then?

Pleeeaaasseee update soon! XD
midnightbat chapter 1 . 10/17/2012
Love this fic!
So I'm guessing that kit is the only one that survived among the ventaran riders and Rogue and Swan are earth riders right?
Please update soon! :3