Reviews for A new chance
TheBayMan chapter 33 . 6/28
I loved this story up to the point they went to Hogwarts and then it just went downhill from there. WAY TOO MUCH Weasleys, Neville, Sirus, Remus and Hogwarts in general! I stopped reading after chapter 20... Just too boring at that point! This could have been very unique if you had Tom and Dumbledore come to Australia and battled there! Oh well it started out good and I did enjoy half your story so thank you for writing it!
jenny chapter 1 . 6/24
I think that I Kind of like the switch in dynamics here, where the family is a bit more supportive and the school is abusive.
nicole.howe.737 chapter 33 . 6/15
I really enjoyed your story and found it unique and well written. However, you can tell that you were struggling towards the end as the chapters were starting to be a bit disjointed and starting to read like a summary. Overall though I really enjoyed it but I do agree with amanda120504's comment about an epilogue as I'd love to read one too, but I guess it's like any good story ... You just don't want it to end
Thanks for sharing your time and imagination :)
amanda120504 chapter 33 . 6/4
Can you write an epilogue?
Guest chapter 3 . 5/2
Heads up on an error, in chapter 3 when harry is introduced to julian, he says he is in lionpaw, then goes on to say the other houses are lionpaw, drizzlesrop and starling. Just figured id point it out for you im loving your storry so far, i always like to read a good redeemable dursleys story, there is so few of them
Guest chapter 12 . 4/14
Pair with a really cute shy girl
Guest chapter 8 . 4/14
No
0dah15 chapter 10 . 3/5
reading this again great plot
Kazbaby chapter 33 . 2/25
I really enjoyed this story.
stylo1 chapter 33 . 2/14
in the books harry only survived the second ak because tom stole his blood. ofc it could still be that he survived but then again its not very original
stylo1 chapter 30 . 2/14
i was searchinf for a place to hide a book i bought on horcruxes amd found a room with a horcrux. excuse me sir im looking dor a book on horcruxes, ah yes young sir in isle 3 next to the second year dada books. also try pacing hogwarts sooner or later you'll find someting intresting. ohhh thank you sir how much? for free my boy knowledge must be shared ofc
stylo1 chapter 17 . 2/14
you have a difficult year ahead of you. prof what sid he mean by that? hmmm hard to say could it be that you are surrounded by dementors in a castle with at least 2 death eater trapped between voldemort and dumbledore? no that cant be it after all we already drawn the line at ligimency so they know not to mess with us.
its a ok story buttt its also full of crap
stacygrrl2002 chapter 31 . 1/25
nice plot twisting to get things to work out. i was surprised tommy didnt do more to protect the ring. too easy. but then, it was early days, and the snow would have hibernated any reptile guards.
stacygrrl2002 chapter 17 . 1/25
what a bunch of idiots. im surprised hermione didnt start as suggested, and ron is dumber than dirt.
stacygrrl2002 chapter 15 . 1/25
i dont believe shes that stupid to accept, to choose harry, or harry for not declining. and of course ole dumbles for brains has done nothing so far, intending for harry to do it all and then politely die.
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