Reviews for Brothers
Anon chapter 4 . 1/15/2013
Niiiiicee. Write more soooon.
skycloud86 chapter 1 . 1/16/2013
Interesting idea. I have an OC who is a brother of a CTU agent, Alex Myers, who is the brother of Nina.

As for the story, this opening chapter is good.
ravarath chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
Interesting start. Just a few points for improvement: there's quite a few things that have unnecessary capitalization, especially in the first paragraph. Your placement of commas is kind of strange too.