Reviews for stay with me girl, we can rule the world
turbine wax heart chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Gemma, I love this. Yes, that makes me sound morbid and depressing and weird, but I don't really care because your writing is amazing and this story is amazing and I'm sort of burbling here, so I'll get to the point.

This is fantastic. The emotions here were so clearly displayed, I felt really sympathetic towards Roisin and yet at the same time I was mentally screaming "Get out of there, girl!" at her through the computer screen. The way you conveyed the emotions and feelings and problems was all so realistic and beautifully presented. :')

I really liked Katie too - the way she acted was also so realistic and just what you'd expect from someone who came from a house that wasn't exactly in domestic harmony. She only knows violence, so how does she react at school? Precisely. I felt sorry for the poor kid, the line "Let's pretend abuse doesn't exist" really hit me hard and it was so strong and powerful and beautiful. I've overused the word beautiful and probably in the wrong context but yeah. :3

I've pretty much run out of describing words to say how much I adore this, but yeah. I adore this. I can't see things ending well for poor Roisin and Katie though, specially not with her abusive husband. Let's hope Mike comes to the rescue. :3

I love you loads! Sorry for my shit review aha, I'm tired. :( xxxxxx