|Reviews for A Betrayal Too Deep|
| mattdombast chapter 16 . 7/28
Would be nice love the couple
| mattdombast chapter 15 . 7/28
To pain in lost soul together
| mattdombast chapter 14 . 7/28
I think Harry's good with zerak ash, savtiar if that how you spell it i like if you save vane , gurus sister and cubs hide them for awhile
| mattdombast chapter 13 . 7/28
Yes love to see harry kill them but for ash
| AnimeHunter411 chapter 17 . 5/6
I hope that you continue to UPDATE this story and SOON!
| Mags1st chapter 17 . 1/23
Can't beleive I hadn't read this ... I mean I've read all your stories. I hope you decide to continue with this, it's reaaaaaal nice :))
| Shinigami Clara chapter 17 . 1/13
I love DH/HP crossovers XD there's not enough of them around! Love the idea of Harry being a DH and i totally think that artemis and apollo should die a horrible horrible death!
i wonder if harry being the master of death will have some significance in this story? i mean, death is the one thing that transcends all the pantheon right? (and is probably older than them all..including the atlantian pantheon) that would be interesting XD
anyways i'm looking forward to more
| Jacquelyn Frost chapter 17 . 12/27/2015
If Harry lets Ash's mom kill Artemis and Apollo, cause we all know if he was planing the demise of those two he would do it that way, then who would take their places? Also, I hope Val stays friends with Harry, I thought it was cool. About the confrontation, Harry should be a mediator. Maybe not now, but definitely when they have that talk, so they don't end up destroying anything, or killing each other.
Btw, I am so hoping for Apollo and Artemis' deaths.
| Ichigo Mirai chapter 17 . 12/23/2015
OMG! I really wanna read how that encounter's going to end up! Still really good! Love this! Please update soon!
| Ichigo Mirai chapter 15 . 12/23/2015
This has been great to read thus far! I love this! Can't wait to read the next two chapters!
| Chickenfly chapter 17 . 11/28/2015
Don't write what you can't finish.
| LicaSchmidt chapter 17 . 10/7/2015
I hope you come back to this fiction sometime. I think Valerius and Harry ando Zarek should have a round of shoutings and acusations. Just than Valerius and Harry could make peace and Valerius and Zarek could make something like trat of not hostilization... Just saying, hahahaha. Kisses
PS: I'm sorry for my pitiful English, I'm a brasilian girl, so... Portuguese is my thing.. D
| jot52 chapter 17 . 9/19/2015
Hello i was wondering if you were going to update on this story/ thank you jt
| jeskasaurus93 chapter 17 . 7/4/2015
please update again and soon.
| DarkynRayne chapter 17 . 6/10/2015
I really love it! Pl update soon!