Reviews for Mermaid Motel
Jennifer Lautner chapter 1 . 1/13/2013
I LOVED that one! Happy and sweet! :)
Master Gaga chapter 1 . 12/5/2012
This short piece is so beautiful. Like, really, really beautiful. It's written in second person, which for me was very surprising. I haven't read a second person story in a lot of time. It was written in such a beautiful manner that it was like reading something in a simple, universal language. Thanks for writing something others wouldn't.
presidentofteamjacob chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
Ha! He should never be insecure. She would never have gotten him in the first place if she wasn't the first female he laid eyes on. Huh. She just got lucky.
(Wish I'd been there instead).

The big question is - should be believe her (the cretin)?

(Sigh) if it makes Jake happy... I'm glad he does :)

Sweet drabble!
bxxchcraft chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
I really adore second person, and I really adore this. Ugh, that was good. It hurt my little fangirl heart.