Reviews for Only One Rule
Netherworld chapter 9 . 6/1/2014
oh, man, I'm reading this story again, and so sorry for not reviewing for the first time!

I have to say I really like how you show the (d)evolution of their relationship over the years, even if it is at times a little unclear where an event belongs (chronologically speaking). I mean, yeah, the italics are always flashbacks, but I'm not sure how they follow each-other, because they seem pretty aberrant.

anyway, awesome story! :D I love their characterizations, especially Aria.

aside from the occasional typo, really good. :)
SniperCT chapter 9 . 2/21/2014
This chapter broke my heart. So emotional!
SniperCT chapter 2 . 2/18/2014
Oh my god, I love this already. You have a masterful way with description, particularly action and emotion. I could visualize perfectly in my head the way Aria was dressing. The leather jacket thing especially. And the muscles.

And the rage. Definitely the rage.

And yay, there's still more to read :D
sherryE chapter 16 . 7/17/2013
This is great stuff
Nyan anon chapter 15 . 6/14/2013
Please continue
jchris7 chapter 15 . 5/26/2013
Great story, we need more Aria and Tevos fic. Love their banter and I thought some chapters are very emotional and well done.

The combat simulator part is very fun, I can totally see that Aria freaking out after someone beats her score lol.
sherryE chapter 15 . 4/3/2013
Outstanding awesome great
sherryE chapter 14 . 4/3/2013
Ha ha ha I love it. This chapter is totally awesome and hella fun :) Great job.
sherryE chapter 13 . 4/3/2013
Excellence is written here. Great job
sherryE chapter 12 . 4/3/2013
Wow. Intense emotional chapter. Very nicely done.
Guest chapter 11 . 4/3/2013
Great story
Guest chapter 10 . 4/3/2013
Jilani needs to be spaced. I'd punch her
sherryE chapter 9 . 4/3/2013
Outfuckingstanding. Wow
sherryE chapter 8 . 4/3/2013
Good stuff
sherryE chapter 7 . 4/3/2013
Great chapter nicely done.
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