Reviews for She Promised
i-am-turk-fear-me chapter 1 . 10/28/2012
KILL KILL Rachel!
Guest chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
I like it- seems fairly believable. Look into it a little and you'll have something worthy of the fanfic awards
NeuroticMusing chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
*huggles Charlie* I love angst, so please keep this up!

Very intense, especially towards the end. Poor Danny. *huggles him as well*

Wha? Sebby's passed out on the ground? He must've tried to help save Danny! :'(

I really liked this, despite how sad it was near the end. You've definitely got a knack for writing tragedies.

-Orwell
JoyScott13 chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
Wow! That was amazing! So sad! I hope you write more for Revolution! :)
Selivia chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
And now you've made me cry. Thanks for not making Monroe the bad guy, because I just have this feeling that Rachel Matheson isn't all we've been led to believe at this point. Charlie's thoughts in regard to other people's motivations and ability to help her were very insightful, especially Nora's. Sometimes something as simple as wanting a good life for your family is the strongest motive to rebel. Fantastic as always!
SupernaturalFlames chapter 1 . 10/7/2012
Wow! Those last few sentences were the best! :D Any plans for another chapter with more background?