|Reviews for His World|
| abbi1kenobi chapter 3 . 9/26/2013
Please write chapter 4 as soon as possible!
| Readerabove chapter 1 . 2/19/2013
What do I think? I loved it! Keep going with the story! (:
I'm a huge fan of the show, Revolution! I love it! I just stated watching it a few weeks ago and fell in love ... Hard. I haven't been able to think about anything else for weeks! Miles and Monroe have to be by far my favorite characters! They bring this new ... what do you call it? Awesome-ness to the show! I'm not sure how to explain it! I can't wait for it to come back on for the rest of the season! Like I said. Big fan! :D Anyways. I made a youtube channel have have a few videos about the show! If anyone wants to check it out, I just want to spread the word. (: I put a lot of work into them and they are pretty cool. (:
Bass Monroe : watch?v8ACsLiOiv_I
Miles Matheson: watch?vQk5I1ctCr50
Charlie Matheson: watch?v47DgSOqMnaw
| DixonVixen93 chapter 3 . 2/17/2013
Hey, this was still really good. It's sweet that Daddy!Bass is all protective over his little girl, even going so far as to take her to see Rachel. That's a good dad, putting her needs over his own.
Definitely looking forward to more here. Liked how there was a relationship with Jason here. But I doubt that Abby will like him much after she learns about Danny.
| boasamishipper chapter 3 . 2/16/2013
:) WOW! SO MUCH FLUFF! *dies*
Okay, fine. I'm still alive. But this was and is such a great chapter! Seriously ah-mazing work! I loved it and I hope you keep on updating!
Abby is adorable, no doubt, and I love how Bass is a daddy. :) *coos* So adorable! Love it!
And I can't wait to hear what happens with Danny and Abby. :)
| M.J Writer chapter 1 . 11/20/2012
I would love to read more! Continue with the amazing work!
| SkullKey4758 chapter 2 . 11/12/2012
i love this story so far... i don't know if it's just the idea of a dad doing that for his daughter or something else because i know my dad would TRY to stand up for me but i would have to rely on my BROTHER for anything like that...I hope you update soon though...
| Imaginemeruler chapter 2 . 10/25/2012
well that boy is not gonna live the night. I love this story soo much so far please update soon!
| Katie chapter 2 . 10/12/2012
Please write more..
| DixonVixen93 chapter 2 . 10/11/2012
*squees* Daddy!Bass to the rescue! :)
Poor Abbie. *huggles her* That first heartbreak is horrid, but daddies always know how to make that heartache just a little less. :'3 That's what they're there for.
I love this little story so far. If I can think of anything, I'll definitely PM it to you.
Just one quibble: "Know she knows" should be "now she knows" otherwise, good chapter. :)
| TimeIsAValuableThing chapter 2 . 10/11/2012
Awww so sweet, can't wait to read more!
| TimeIsAValuableThing chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
I love it, please please please write more!
| orderofphoniex chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
I want to see where this goes with Monroe having a daughter :)!
| IronAmerica chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
Your story nearly got me in big trouble during class today. It's too adorable not to go "squee" over. Trust me on that one.
Of course, we all *know* Bass is actually a big softie at heart. It's nice to see others writing stories like that. I do, however, feel sorry for whatever boy his baby girl decides to date. *cracks up* God, that poor sap.
I have some quibbles: You've dropped commas. A lot of them. And there are a few places where the tense changes from present limited-omniscience to past tense, but it was only the once that I could see, so no big.
The biggest thing I would suggest changing, though is writiing "and, in his upset state, Bass does" instead of "and in his upset state he does". It clarifies the issue of who's doing something he'll regret later, because you started the sentence with Miles leaving.
Otherwise, this fic made me smile and squee. Lovely story. *adds to favs*
| DixonVixen93 chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
Oh my goodness, this was adorable! I literally don't know what else to say about it.
I love the idea of a daddy!Bass! It's so adorable! *squees* They're such a cute little family, I swear!
Please write more for this little 'verse! :)