|Reviews for Dusk|
| fairyprincess91 chapter 1 . 10/15/2012
Great, I really like how Harry has a place where he can be with his lover alone
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
A really short story and for it I give you: five bronze stars.
Hope to see more of your work one day soon.
The Crimson Mage.
| S. Rune chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
I am thinking that this is an affair. Beautiful though. :)
| The Legend of Derpy chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
Now, I am well aware that it is quite hard to tell a story with only one hundred words. However, I feel like this story wasn't carried out very well. I relied on the description to tell me what was going on, since I was having bit of a hard time figuring it ot on my own. Now, I do like your writing style as it is quite beautiful on its own. Writing one hundred words stories are quite hard, so all I can suggest to you is to try and make sure your readers will understand your tale without help from the description. In other words, read your story over before posting and make neccesary changes if you ever doubt your readers will not understand your story. Proof reading and editing is your friend as an author.
All in all, nice drabble, but it might need some editing.
-LoD, Critics United