|Reviews for Cyberprepbully|
| Guest chapter 14 . 2/11
omfg why do i like this story
| KarissaKane chapter 6 . 8/24/2013
I've read just a few chapters and I have to stop and say some things even though I doubt you'll come on and see this.
. Immediately after reading the first paragraph I thought "Oh my God, it's another My Immortal" and that, good sir, this not something this planet needs. You are either Tara, somehow affiliated with her, or a total f*cking poser and troll.
. Your spelling and grammar is atrocious. I don't know what else to say about that.
. Oh yes, f*ck those "nerds" who actually do their homework. One day you'll be letting guys put their "boy thingies" in your "you know what" for money because you flunked out of high school and your mother disowned you while the "nerds" actually do something meaningful with their lives.
. You say in Chapter 1, that Taylor/Taelor, whatever the f*ck you call her is not anorexic despite some people thinking she is. And then, just a few chapters down, look who's not eating lunch because she's anorexic.
. What the hell kind of school do they go to? I can't imagine any school allowing students to dress that way.
. Why is everyone either;
. A) Goth
. B) Prep
. C) Poser?
Here is an exert from Urban Dictionary defining the word "prep"
"Popular belief is that preps hate nerds/goths/punks/etc, however, generally, preps pay little attention to other "types," and those who hate preps with the most passion are those who were once preps and have recently gone away from their previous behavior, and often people who are posers intent on protecting their alternative-ness. "
What?! Former "preps" and posers tend to hate "preps" the most? Hmmmm ...
. The way you treat serious issues such as self harm and bullying, shows you really don't give a sh*t what people think since you did not bother to educate yourself on well, just about anything pertaining to your little story. Don't even bother pretending you're upset about these mean reviews because trolls love attention.
. I think you wrote that second review yourself. That or you got some troll pal of yours to anonymously post that positive review which is, quite frankly, disgusting. xxxSamantha_feelthedarkness? Give me a break
Let me finish this post by saying your ignorance and hypocrisy makes me physically ill. I sincerely hope you move somewhere that is lacking an Internet connection.
| iloveHairyOMG99 chapter 12 . 8/9/2013
I really like this part cuz I think sadism and depresson and stuff lik that is a weird like creepy thing to esplore and wirte about so it kinda went into a cool sycological deep study and I think u pulled it off really good.
| iloveHairyOMG99 chapter 1 . 8/9/2013
Im not goth but I still really likes this chapter its a good introductun to the whole story and I watched the movie and this really was just like it but creepyer kinda.
| LunaEvanna Longbottom chapter 14 . 8/7/2013
For one; No-one knows what you're saying! Go back to school and learn some freaking grammar.
For two; You are ruining the movie Cyberbully with your craptastic writing and this stupid ass plot.
For three; You should be ashamed of yourself for even writing this story. You've offended so many freaking people and the only reviews you have are from people telling you to stop your story and your racism.
| YouSuckAss chapter 2 . 8/6/2013
"She was black but she was goffik anyway."
So your oc is an idiot AND a racist? I don't know if I should feel more insulted for goths or black people...
Get a life you damn troll.
| TakeThisDown chapter 13 . 8/6/2013
I don't care if you're trolling or not. You've crossed some serious lines here.
Firstly, your world view is severely depressing. I weep for humanity. Preps, posers and "goffs"- that's how you've benchmarked every single person. This is classic Tara Gilesbie blah blah...but still. Anyone with the brain capacity of a single cell organism should be able to acknowledge that people cannot be categorized so easily. Or in language you may understand..."We not all same same."
Another thing, all this rot about suicide and self harm. Right, it was funny when Tara Gilesbie wrote it, ha ha. We're done with it. It was lousy to make light of it then, and its even worse now. This is pure attention seeking behaviour which by the way, is as far away from being authentically goth as is possible. So that in fact, makes you a poser (Yeah. I went there.)
That's not even my problem though. It's your morbid view of bullying that takes the cake. For someone writing a fic about bullying, you've got the makings of a pretty good one yourself. Making fun of people in self help groups? Wow. Seriously, this is just low. I can only hope you're...eight years old or something (which would incidentally also explain your butchering of the English language) and don't really have the capacity to understand wtf it is you're doing over here.
I never flame. Really, I don't. I get the whole writer's arc thing- obviously you have to start somewhere.
But this fic should not exist. I'm reporting you for god awful grammar and offensive content. And if there was a check box for "KILL IT! KILL IT WITH KNIVES AND FIRE!" rest assured, I would check that too.
Lousy, shoddy, shameful work. Even for a troll.
Go away. And don't come back until you have something worth reading again.
| Rachael chapter 11 . 7/15/2013
wow dis waz so emoshinol!1!11111!111 :'(
| tapperbell chapter 1 . 6/15/2013
Oh my gosh... FIX THE SPELLING! Please.
I couldn't even freaking read it...
But seriously, PLEASE fix it. I'm just trying to help you with your writing, not to be mean.
| Dah doip dope chapter 14 . 6/15/2013
This was the greatest epic I ever did read
| Gray Shadow chapter 1 . 5/15/2013
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/27/2013
Okay, if you think this story is something to be proud of, then you need a serious reality check, because you've completely trashed the storyline of "Cyberbu/y" and completely messed up the canon (original characters) I mean seriously, your spelling is awful, and the amount of times you keep misspelling your characters names is unbelievable.
Now, I'm gonna say something people have said time andtime again: Taylor IS the bully, not Lindsay (not cool on the "fake bitch" sterotype by the way). Also, your "Goths" are the biggest bunch of posers I've ever come across in my life, and not "tru Goffs" at all like you've been saying. THEY ARE POSERS! YOU ARE A POSER! DEAL WITH IT AND GET THE FACTS STRAIGHT!
And why would ANYONE be jealous of you for writing this? It's so bad it makes me question your age and whether you're old enough to be on here (Don't even get me started on the stupid things you type instead of "hooked up" "had sex" or whatever).
And the fact that you claim to not know who Tara Gilesbie is, is freaking bullshit, because you write exactly (and I do mean EXACTLY) like her, so much so that maybe you are her.
SERIOUSLY, IF YOU DON'T WANT PEOPLE TO LEAVE "MEAN" REVIEWS, BLOODY WELL FIX THIS THING UP OR REMOVE IT!
| Guest chapter 14 . 3/24/2013
What the hell? Seriously? The guidance teachers a vampire? And since when are Linkin Park and Korn Goth bands? They're metal. If I were you, I'd seriously do some research because you've mocked Goths (I being one so it's offensive) cyberbully victims (I mean come on, Taylor called Lindsay a bitch because she asked her if she was going to a Hilary Duff concert. What the hell...) and people who have thought about killing themselves. (The dying hair blonde thing was so ridiculous, and Goths can have blonde hair, so black hair isn't always a requirement.)
And also, suicide isn't "Goffick" either. It's an extremely serious thing and shouldn't be taken lightly. So if you're going to make fun of it, expect some bad reviews. Because how anyone actually likes this is beyond me. Maybe people would give it a chance if it was actually well thought-out, the bullying actually made sense (so that would be the girl getting buillied for her clothes, not because people think she isn't a Goth) and not everyone was dressed like wannabe Goth posers.
Trust me, I've seen that, and it was obvious to tell who was faking and who wasn't. And obviously you and Taylor are, because you've painted her out to be the biggest poser I've ever seen. And I've seen a lot of posers before.
I don't actually care what you say, Taylor is a poser, all your Goths are posers, Lindsay IS the nice one, and this story is completely ridiculous. (I still can't believe you named this chapter after a phrase you could tell everyone in the A/N, and don't even get me started on the shit with all the prep hate. Goths aren't elitist, they're more open-minded, and Taylor's about as open-minded as a sealed jar.) But if a story is so bad, like this one, it's GOING to get flamed/hated/removed or whatever.
So fix the bloody grammar, and spelling mistakes and write in proper English. I don't care what you bite back with, I stick to my opinion of this story.
| Yukari Yuzuki chapter 1 . 3/23/2013
I already know from the title, that this person wants attention just like "Enoby Dark'ness Dementia Raven/Tara Way"
| Yania chapter 14 . 3/23/2013
Alright, now you're just taking the mick. I read the whole story, and I've gotta say, suicide and self-harming is not Gothic (or Goffick, as you put it for an unknown and stupid reason) and I read the A/N, and I have a whole bunch of things to say:
1) The whole Atheist/Satan thing is actually really stupid, people who worship Satan are Satanists, and Atheists don't believe in anything at all.
2) The people who review are actually trying to HELP you, and if you can't see that then you're an idiot. Partly because you've ignored their advice completely, and probably in the process pissed off alot of Goths/Self-harmers (for LOGICAL reasons, not your stupid and ridiculous ones) Bully victims, etc.
3) And you keep defending Taylor, but A) You keep spelling her name wrong (and you do with almost all the characters, I swear there's one who flicks between being calling "Scott", and then "Dani") and B) She has done stuff wrong, she ain't perfect, and if you think she is then you need a serious reality check. She's actually been mean, and I agree with nearly all the reviews that have said Linsday is the nice one, because she actually is. I don't care what you say, she IS nice.
4) What the bloody hell is your problem with Non-Goths? (or preps as you call them?) They're just normal people.
5) Last thing, the whole thing about the Goffick revolution is completely ridiculous. It IS okay for people to not be Goths, and that teacher in the "threapy" session seems like a real idiot.
Also, the stuff you've put Taylor through is NOT cyberbullying, it's a true offence to people who've gone through it, especially Amanda Todd, you make it seem like a joke when it's extremely serious. And you really need to fix the grammar, spelling, and well, EVERYTHING, about this story, or at least learn the basic rules of writing before you carry on.