|Reviews for Carnelian and Ice|
| moosals chapter 4 . 2/1
And here's the other missing one -
Oh, he got fired because of the sculpture? Or rather the sculpture and it's title made him realise something about his life, his work and his relationship with his boss perhaps? Hmm...
I have a strange fascination for carnivorous plants, although my favourites are the trumpet pitchers. I am intrigued by Edward's response to her little rant and the fact that he hasn't mentioned her eyes changing colour...I might say he's colour blind, but perhaps he's more aware that she is different than he is letting on.
Thank you :)
| moosals chapter 3 . 2/1
I'm looking at my review replies and wondering why you didn't reply on this and chapter 4. Well now I know they didn't go through :( Sorry, you must have wondered if I didn't like these chapters.
This is what I said -
My favourite chapter so far! The two paragraphs in which you describe her reaction to his scent are fantastic. I'm curious though, did she just resist her singer, or is he just very appealing because she has now tasted human blood?
I wonder what he did to get fired, and why is he staying in a hotel?
Off to read the next one...thank you :)
| moosals chapter 10 . 1/31
That was beautifully done. I'm sad it's over, but I like that you leave a little untold about these two for me to go off and play with in my own imagination.
Thank you for sharing your lovely words Raum :)
| moosals chapter 9 . 1/31
I'm so pleased she made the right decision - though I'd have left with him myself!
Well done Edward for texting the "invitation" and well done Alice for the perfectly timed confirmation of Bella's decision :)
The question remains, will she change Edward or just ravish him...?
| moosals chapter 8 . 1/31
Oh, you meanie! You ask a question, but keep all the clues to the next chapter, whilst your readers flounder about guessing ;) (I'm laughing, just to be clear.)
Come on Bella! He says he's never opened up with another like this and he feels such a connection - when is she going to realise he's her mate? He'll probably work that out first too ;)
After those kisses, if he wants to go to his cabin, she should follow him. After all her design business is online...
I loved this chapter, thank you :)
| moosals chapter 7 . 1/31
Another surprise! I definitely prefer Alice to the alternatives.
Bella's line that she is afraid to hope is heartbreakingly sad.
Edward is so sweet and extremely trusting. I'm not sure if has made the connection between Bella and Carnelian. I think he could just be thinking of her eyes and remembering the word/name he saw at the ice park. Perhaps he'll put two and two together when he wakes up...assuming she doesn't eat him first ;)
Thank you :)
| moosals chapter 6 . 1/31
Wow, that was a dramatic move on Bella's part - all that glass was kind of reminiscent of the birthday party in NM, but without the blood!
I like how you say Edward has witnessed her invulnerability, yet she is really at her most vulnerable emotionally, admitting what she is to him and risking his departure. He took it all in his stride though, didn't he.
I am so pleased he hugged her and am warmed by his admission and question at the end. Thank you :)
| moosals chapter 5 . 1/31
Edward IS dessert, whether Bella partakes or not ;) ...but no, I don't think she could do that.
It's interesting how these two match each other so well. In reassuring Edward, she is telling him exactly what she should tell herself.
I like the story of Bella's change, but of course am wondering which of the Alaskan vampires bit her. I'm sad poor Angela didn't make it :(
Im off to see if Bella had a taste of Edward!... Thank you :)
| moosals chapter 2 . 1/31
Well you surprised me with the reason for her red eyes. She showed a lot of control indeed, both for that and it would appear for her other activities!
That was a kind thing she did for Mike and Jessica. For someone who considers herself a soulless monster, she is proving herself to be the very opposite.
I'm hoping she'll bump into someone with green eyes...
Thanks you :)
| moosals chapter 1 . 1/31
The ice sculptures sound beautiful and intriguing. I love how you have given details and explanations for Bella's creations. I hope that is Edward taking an interest them.
My favourite part was your paragraph describing how it feels when you finish reading a book - that's exactly how it feels. (Obviously Bella never knew about fanfiction ;) )
I'm looking forward to finding out what happened two weeks ago and am already forming ideas of what may happen to Mike on their date...
| divyvicki chapter 10 . 1/18
Just a wonderful story. So glad I read it.
| divyvicki chapter 9 . 1/18
Such a great great story.
| divyvicki chapter 8 . 1/18
Great chapter as usual.
| divyvicki chapter 7 . 1/18
Just love this story. Thanks for the recommendation of the story.
| divyvicki chapter 6 . 1/17
What a great chapter!