can you post 10 more chapters plz

great work

hi..i create ebooks..mind if i use this?

write more already

nice

how about in nico's to keep the fans reading

guilty Nico moment! PS Stop Picking on Nico, every-one! all of the fanfics I have read have something to do with making Nico feel guilty!:) keep writing,its good!:):#)

So. Freaking. Amazing.

nice chapter! love it! veronica sound so nice...

Ooh. The twondemigods I'd failed to save. Thats a very good sentence! Alright, criticism: Veronica and nico got into a fight in 0.3 seconds flat. Maybe draw out the suspense ad bit more? yeah, that's it. Thanks! Great chapter!

AWESOME! That is the best fan fiction I have every read, even better than my own, and I have read almost every posted story ever for this book. So that is saying a lot. MORE VERONICO! Why haven't they started dating yet? Also, nemesis is the goddes of revenge. She would not make that big of a mistake. I am sorry if I sound like a little kid, pointing out every little thing, but I am planning on being a... Oh I forgot what it is called. It is where you read good books, and diside what will be in the movie and what will not. You have to pay attention to every little detail. Anyway, please answer my questions,

Thank you,
Brianna I Simpson
(P.S. sorry about the letter format, I am practicing for a test like crazy, and sometimes I slip into it at random times!)

awwwwww i luv it so much! write more soon :)

Loved it! Keep writing, I want to read the follow chapters!

So sad... Update soon!

Nice! I've been reading your story since the day you started, and I've got to say, you're pretty amazing. When you first mentioned adding Veronica to the story, I said NO WAY, SHE'LL RUIN THE STORY. But you managed to add her to the story without ruining it. I'm going to be sad when she's not in the actual House of Hades next fall :(