Reviews for When No One is Looking
TolkienGirl chapter 1 . 11/21/2014
Oh, LOKI. This was insightful and cutting. Wow.
The Wayfaring Strangers chapter 1 . 11/4/2012
This. This is... Exquisite.

You certainly have a gift with words - making them flow and pool in all the right places. I really like this couplet:' Accuse me now of tears? I turn aside.
Allow my shifting shape to hide this face.'

Very in character! Let me encourage you to write more poetry. The sonnet form is (at least for me) very difficult, and you did an excellent job with it. My only qualm is with the title - it isn't nearly dynamic enough for the poem, in my opinion. That said, it's your choice. But if you're having trouble coming up with titles, you could try pulling out a compelling word of phrase from the poem. I do that a lot. :) All in all, I think this is really good. Keep writing poetry!
Oswin Partridge chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
I'm just... wow. That honestly made me cry! Beautiful, just beautiful. Well done.