Reviews for Living Together
Guest chapter 1 . 1/25
Love it! xxxx
brookerz122493 chapter 1 . 11/7/2013
Loved it! More please?
Aspenxo chapter 1 . 11/17/2012
awww I loved this! Please do more, it feels like it can't end there! :)
Anonymous033 chapter 1 . 10/19/2012
So, I'm finally reviewing this after 10 days :P *ahem* sorry.

Hi :D

You've outdone yourself on this one, my dear. You might think you don't do established Tiva, but you're really good at writing it :D

The beginning is so sad! With the case and the suicide and Gibbs' self-loathing, oh :( but it's sweet, how Ziva stayed behind to talk to him. I love their relationship.
"... The unhappiest forensic scientist in the NCIS building." That just breaks my heart. Because Abby is Abby, and she's always a happy something. She's the happiest everything. I love the complete reversal you've done here, but really, it's breaking my heart.

I love the flashback! And the kisses, of course :P and it's sweet, how Tony confesses that he doesn't like sleeping without Ziva anymore. And then, of course, using her shower gel and eating her homemade paella and sleeping on the sheets she had made him buy :P he's head over heels for her, hahaa. She's in every aspect of his life!

I love how Ziva let him comfort her. And her confession! "I realized tonight when I was driving home that I do not like the thought of going to bed without you either, so I drove here instead and that makes me feel scared… and safe at the same time." That made my heart go thumpa thumpa :P just sayin'. And then they're talking about moving in, and SQUEE! This is it: Tony and Ziva, moving in together. Finally. I think I'm just as excited as them :P

And the final "I love you," aww. It's awesome.

You did really good, Miri!

me chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
dcXxXcd chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
Happy Birthday to you, you’re a hundred and two, you look like a monkey and smell like one too.
Happy Birthday to me, I’m a hundred and three, I look like a princess and everyone loves me.
No, cut that crap, I’m just kidding.
Happy, happy Birthday to the best author I know. I can’t give you a fanfiction as a gift like you did, but I can give you a review. May the force always be with you, Miri.
Lot’s of Love, Lena :*
Ps.: And yes, you will get a real present too :D.
Robern chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
loved it!
AliyahNCIS chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
Definitely love it. I feel bad for Gibbs facing a situation so close to his own but I'm glad he talked to Z even if it made her cry. I'm glad T&Z are together and I like that she feels safe at his place. Interested to see where they go next - this is either a recipe for disaster or the best idea they've ever had. And ILY makes it all the sweeter. Thanks!
thump chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
it reads well! nothing to worry about... but the only angst i want to read about is the typical toilet seat up/toothpaste cap off/stop cleaning your guns and knives on the kitchen table/etc. kind of tiffs lol
Dr. JES chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
Duh - loved it, of course! I would most definitely read a continuation. So please continue. And then write for the show...I'll work on that as your birthday present...
mishka chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
Love it!
Justine chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
It's perfect!
gsr4ever chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
Really good nice job
pia chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
a super sweet story, i hope that something like this does happen on the series. what? so what if it's wishful thinking?!
tivaandmcabby chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
Definitely love it! I can understand why you are hesitant about writing in the established tiva territory, but you've done a really great job with this. i can see this becoming a really good multi chapter if you decide to continue this and explore other sides of tony and ziva's relationship related to them living together :)