|Reviews for Ard Patrinell: The Story of a Wronk|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/17/2016
you did a good job with all four chapters
| wendums chapter 4 . 6/10/2012
Very well written and I do just love 'fill in' stories. from the point of view of the'wronk'Ard it is beautifully written. I stayed up half the night reading it. It is now 5.50am UK time. I aam now looking for more of your work. Thanks
| Wendums chapter 1 . 6/10/2012
Wow. It is quite a while since I read 'voyages' and now your story will have me ordering the pensioner bus down into town and the library to get the series again. What a brilliant read. I get soo peed off when stories do not get finished. if I was a writer and had a block, temporary or not, i would remove my story or mark unfinished. I do look for 'complete' but many fics have no mention. I am liking this fic very much and will be looking for more of your work. thanks from a UK granny
| xxFireWarriorxx chapter 4 . 12/30/2009
Ohmygosh... *sniffle* That was so gorgeously beautiful... The description, the emotions... oh gosh, especially the emotions. Poor Ard, poor Tamis... poor Quentin.. poor everyone... lol
But seriously, AMAZING job. I remember reading Antrax and going beserk over how it could change people in wronks and then use them like that. I felt so incredibly sad for Ard and how he was being forced to kill his friends against his will. It might be better if he wasn't conscious, but he WAS. And that makes all the difference.
Anyways, I'm glad you wrote this. It was very nice to read and definitely added closure to the story between Ard, Tamis, and Quentin. In the story we never did get to see Patrinell's side, and this story was so amazingly described. The emotions were portrayed perfectly.
Kudos on a great job! :) :)
| Michael chapter 4 . 10/14/2008
Really nice! You definitely can write! I don't know what could be improved here.
| yrchgrrrl chapter 4 . 3/19/2005
Wow! This is great. Your writing style is as compelling as Brooks' himself. This is one subplot that, although grisly, I wish Brooks had explained more to us. I think you captured it well. I only hope George Lucas gives us much of the same when he shows how Anakin becomes Darth Vader after the volcano-which this storyline always reminded me of.
| Guest chapter 4 . 1/7/2005
| Rita chapter 4 . 2/13/2004
I really loved that... I've been fascinated and horrified with the idea of wronks ever since I read of them in The Voyage of the Jerle Shannara, and your story has really brought the entire concept of what Ard Patrinell became to life.
| Lady Elendil chapter 1 . 8/15/2003
Wow, I've only read chapter one so far, but I'm already hooked! I couldv'e sworn I was reading Terry Brooks himself. Please keep up the great work!
| Shadekin chapter 4 . 8/7/2003
As I said, you really are talented. Hopefully you'll write more stories. I'll be waiting to see.
And by the way, can you please bother to look at my ficcie? thx. :P
| Shadekin chapter 3 . 8/7/2003
Wow. There are so many parallels from the original to your version, and your version stands the heat each and every time. Keep writing, you talented, talented person!
| Stormer chapter 3 . 1/18/2003
Acccck! Bad formatting...please fix up the paragraphs so I can read this in peace? *g*
| Stormer chapter 2 . 1/18/2003
Good good, it's good still *g* Nice illustration of Ard's memories. Sad yet well written. Anyway, I'll read on now!
| Stormer chapter 1 . 1/18/2003
Hi there! Firstly, thank you very much for your review! Secondly, I think your writing is amazing! You know the characters well and illustrate them equally as well. Also, your writing itself is of high quality. Good job! Will definitely read on! p.s. Triss rocks! *g* I know this isn't about Triss but just had to say that :P
| Shadekin chapter 1 . 1/15/2003
This story would impress Terry Brooks.
Keep up the good work!