Reviews for He Loves Me, He Loves Me Not
BlackKitsune chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
This isn't bad at all. It really displayed Mary's desperation to escape in a short and simple manner. Don't say such things about you writing... ;v;
blueflower1594 chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
I liked it, but I think it would have more meaning if Mary saw that Ib wanted nothing to do with her after what she did to Garry. It would be a sad, yet intersting twist to her point of view.
Kiyiamayu chapter 1 . 10/8/2012
This may be word vomit to you but I thought it was really well done! Definitely liked your portrayal of Mary's thoughts and emotions. I really hate Mary but I can understand her horrible lonliness, especially after reading this. Great job. )