Reviews for Awaken, Noblesse
Tsukoblue chapter 11 . 3/2/2020
I hope this awesome story will eventually get an update
Imperial-samaB chapter 11 . 1/3/2020
This is amusing
Silverman1212 chapter 8 . 9/25/2019
this is what i was afraid gonna happen , truly a shame . the story was soooo great , i loved it . but this whole mating thing and lust is just really bad writing . the whole chapter seemed forced . i dont care if the story has harem , i do read many like that and like it too but you put the whole hormones thing and forced the harem . the hell is wrong with her changing like that , she sounded like a sl*t , it seems you did that coz you didnt want to bother writing romance and just want to find excuse to get him more women . anyway even tho you stopped updating this i am sad i cant even keep reading the rest of the chapters . i am out .

can i make a suggestion ? i really hope you rewrite this story , coz it has everything i like in a story minus the whole mating thing . please write a story with proper romance , it can be harem but do it right .its been so many years since you wrote this story so i am sure you are better now as a write and could make a great story , so please rewrite this , i am sure it would become incredibly popular .
Silverman1212 chapter 7 . 9/25/2019
great chapter , really hope in these chapters to come we can see the captains and other shinigamis reactions to him too .
Silverman1212 chapter 6 . 9/25/2019
hmmm , i dont know what it is but there was something about this chapter which made me not enjoy it at all , i just kept reading with a frown. well i hope next chapter is better .
Silverman1212 chapter 5 . 9/25/2019
awesome chapter , even tho i like Byakuya i am hyped to see Ichigo dominate everyone so easily . and that last part , oh damn .
Silverman1212 chapter 4 . 9/25/2019
damn awesome chapter , i love how godlike he is , even a captain was like an ant before him and that with with his powers sealed too , i am loving this sooo much , i really hope the mating thing doesn't ruin this . thanks .
Silverman1212 chapter 3 . 9/24/2019
this is truly a great story the only thing i am afraid will ruin it is the whole "all the girls will lust after him" vibe thats seems to be happening already .i will see a couple more chapters and really hope not coz this is just my cup of tea with him having noblesse power and being godlike . altho i find the Ragnork part not necessary , i mean will he even use it ? or need it ? hell having no loss of life when using his power is making him an uber-godlike , dont get me wrong i am not complaining , the more godlike he is the happier i am , just was wondering the point of Ragnork , thats all . oh yeah i liked that his sister is the shinigami now , he will have a reason to go to soul society and rek their world haha .
Silverman1212 chapter 2 . 9/24/2019
nooo , now i know for sure this story will be all about harem . why ruin a great story ? well its already not updated but i hope those chapters wont just have a lustful ichigo going madly after girls , this would truly be it for me otherwise .
Silverman1212 chapter 1 . 9/24/2019
this is really interesting start , i hope he is as godlike as Raizel .
IamDemonWolf chapter 11 . 9/9/2019
Why did you stop writing this? I've needed to laugh for a while now and decided to see if you had stories other than Sealkeeper, and then I discovered this gem. Will be reading your other stories now too.
Guest chapter 11 . 8/26/2019
I love this fiction! Please continue!
The Qrow chapter 3 . 8/22/2019
You spent the last two chapters explaining he's pretty much emotionless and then out of nowhere he goes charming and starts hitting on girls. Yeah I'm out. This killed the story for me.
The Qrow chapter 2 . 8/22/2019
Alright man, heres the deal. First chapter was okey, this chapter was shit. I mean c'mon, show, don't tell! Using a chapter like a info dump like this is just bad writing, make us realise what happens instead throughout the story. Also what was with the whole "you must merge your swords" bullshit? If Rai had done this several times before then sure, he might have that information but for crying out loud, this is new to him aswell. He shouldn't have any idea of what is possible and whats not.

Giving Ragnarok to Ichigo is just overkill. There is no point, no logic and no reason behind why he has it or why he should have it. Cut it out.

The harem stuff? Horrible. Once again, show don't tell. "Your hormones will lead your mates to you" is just saying that you're either to lazy or not expereinced enough to write a proper romance and will use this to explain why several girls will get together and 'decide to share Ichigo because he is so perfect blablabla'. I don't have anything against harems but for the love of god, don't throw it in our face at chapter two that it's going to happen. Let us figure it out ourself throughout the story.

Rai is also way to calm about this. "Oh yeah I died and now I'm apperantly in a new world. Here, have my powers. I can apperantly grant them to people if I somehow get inside their soul". A more sensible background story to this would be Ichigo seeing Rais memories because he's somehow a reincarnation of him. That way you wouldn't have to explain Rais behaviour and could keep some of the mystery behind Ichigos powers.

But seriously, go back to this chapter and remove Ragnarok from the story alltogheter. It's like giving One Punch Man a allmighty weapon. Serves no real purpose you know?
XXxxxadisxxxXX chapter 8 . 8/2/2019
...there related...she's his aunt...uh oh
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