This was extremely hard to read. Your ability to describe the sensations and feelings that Grimmjow was experiencing felt entirely real to me. It was painful but I felt I HAD to keep reading- for him. Isn't that silly? To feel so much for a character you know isn't real but your words make give him an existence even if it is a short one. The closing was brutal and so final I had to catch my own breath. Bravo!

This is brilliant. The story flows in such a way it doesn't give you time to ponder things, yet after you've read it, it makes you ruminate about life, and society and everything for a long, long while.

This is not the first time I've read this work. Back then, I didn't even have a account. It was part of what changed me as a person. So now that I was sent to your account once again by a dArt friend of mine, I don't regret reading it again, even if I know it word by word.

Society shouldn't be allowed to decide who lives and who doesn't. Even though justice has to be made, and even though I'm an atheist too, we're all human. They're not God, they can't take lives as if it's their birthright, or something. Everybody deserves second chances. Death by injection, and death by all means, should only be inflicted on those in suffering, to put them out of their misery. And usually by choice too.

I'd like to end my little speech here and say that I loved this a lot, even though it pulled at my heartstrings and made me wonder how small and insignificant we all are in the end, I still loved it. Great job and hope to see more of you around here.

Made me cry. You're good.

DDDDDDx aksjbgjwenSMDNTQOIEFNKLWNGDVNALGN While I like this, at the same time I don't because Grimm dies. So many feels Dx

I was close to the end, and I knew what was going to happen. I started to cry and I could barrely read the screen. But I really liked the story.

My chest constricted from the beginning, my eyes stung and I ended up crying. This was horrible, I mean it's sort of written masterfully, but I feel like my chest hurts even now after I finished reading it. Seriously, I feel so pained.
It reminded me of an episode of Grey's anatomy, where there's also an execution after which I think I cried for easily an hour straight.

I've always loathed the death penalty. I'm relieved they don't do it in my country, but it still horrifies me they do it in other places. In the modern age. It just sounds so horrible and absurd to me. I'm no religious person, but it just seems so ungodly to me. I mean a life's a life and it's invaluable and for the state or whatever to be able to legally off it, it screams fascism or something to me.
My family wasn't ever a victim of murder or anything so I get that I don't get what people go through, but I dunno, it all just screams horrible to me. Like, it shouldn't exist. Murder shouldn't be institutionalized. Shouldn't ever be condoned. The Justice system or whatever can't be so self righteous while at the same time doing this. Right?
And also, justice isn't the ultimate truth, it really isn't. It doesn't save anyone, not really. At least I don't see it happenning. It's just a mean to satiate some form of emptiness that can't ever be filled again. The void will still be there, right? After the murderer is murdered, and then what? What good would it have done? How else would you avoid your feelings? It seems like a never ending cycle of misery to me.

*sighs* This was too long and I dunno if it's appreciated, but my head just organized the angst reading this gave me and I thought I'd share. U
aggg Justice shouldn't be put above else. aggg here I go again. wait no. sorry, I'll stop.

ps: I gasped when I realized it was grimm's baby. It was too awful. Thank you for sharing this dark dark fic. It really touched me. :)

I think this has gotta be one of the best things i've ever read. I dont know how to describe it, but its just perfect.
It really did pull at my heart strings just the way i love. Just like i love to feel.
I love that there was no last minute changes. That his fate didn't change and he couldn't fight it off.
Its such a sad, down to earth story.
Thank you for putting it out here.

I feel sick now. There is no pity in killing a man in that cold, unavoidable way. This makes my heart boil, I wish your story hadn't been so well written, at last I wouldn't have been so heart-struck Anyway, this was a fucking great story, don't doubt it :)

I haven't read 'behind blue eyes', so I don't exactly know what to say about that...

But this story, my god. It was so raw and intense and so full of desperation and misery, for me. To be put inside the mind of a person on death row? It's rather chilling. And ah, so many dark emotions swirling around in there, I don't know which one to start. This made me feel terrible for Grimmjow, how he's stuck in a situation with no choice, before prison and after prison, and I wept right along with him. The last few paragraphs, on the table? Mind. Blowing. My heart is stuck in my throat from trying not to bawl. I feel especially... Stomped on... Because I freaking love Grimmjow and it physically pains me to see him in such a hopeless, pathetic situation, but everything has a consequence and you cannot escape no matter how you try, and that is life.

My chest feels like a void I don't even know. I can't articulately even /begin/ to explain how this makes me feel.

Freaking brilliant, amazingly well done. I hope you're satisfied after you tore my heart out of ribs and squashed it under your boot (no no I'm just kidding, no hard feelings)
Great work
*curls up in a corner and silently cries*

I havent't cried about a fic for some time but this...! it was very poetic and the way Grimmjow spoke was like he knew it would be over no matter what. even when he resisted..
Anyway I love love love this fiction. When Grimmjow says he's like a piece of the sky that's fallen down... ugh your wording was so beautiful!
And it did surprise me and re-break my heart when it turned out it was his kid he killed alongside with the girl.
Finally uhm it might sound weird but I'm glad you didn't choose the happy ending scheme where Starkk would've found a way and blabla. No, I liked how you kept it real bc that's how it works in real life.

Okay, that's it for my rambling heehee
you're amazing :)))

OkAY REALLY ACTUALLY CRYING HERE. OFF TO SOB IN A CORNER.

THANKS.

BYE.

I listened to the song whilst reading this and I almost cried, Grimmjow is my favourite character in bleach and it's just so sad, the song rally sets the mood for the story and if you play it through out reading it the effect is even more powerful, I could actually picture every thing that was going on whilst reading, it was like a movie but it was so sad, ugh I think I am gonna cry actually.

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I do not have words... This touched my heart :)

Damn good story.

This was amazingly well written, the thought process brought me to tears. Even to the very last word I was fighting to not cry. But you know, I lost that battle. How did you come up with an idea like this? I would've never been able to describe this situation to this great of an extent. Please keep writing it's your calling honest.
/goes off to feel my feels