I was reading this during class and I wanted to cry. The end was sad. But it was good. I like it.

Dear god. This story deserves its own league, maybe its own webpage or just a fucking pedestal. Although I'd love to see Grimm's last I'm-gonna-give-you-nightmares smirk towards the woman as a form of revenge or something just to give me some consolation, you did absolutely right not to go down that road. You offered no comfort for the reader whatsoever and as much as it may sound weird, that's what made the story believable.
And that line: 'Everything about me belongs up in the air, like I'm just a lost puzzle piece that fell to earth. And I haven't been able to find my way back up since.'
...well, that was just pure and utter brilliance. Congratulations.

Darn, this piece is depressing. But I like how you storytelling Grimmjow's feeling during the last seconds of his life. It's done awesomely btw.

...All I can say is...hot damn. Depressing as shit, and certainly makes me wonder about just how humane the death penalty really is. This is a wonderful fic. It's tragic, but at the same time I don't feel sad, just very very depressed and hopeless and bad for him.

Wonderful story.