Great chapter dude

Wow he is EVIL! I feel sorry for sparrow/ pop.

I also wonder what will happen with flash and pinkie?

great chapter dude. Feel sorry for flashes parents though. Chimera's are no joke. update soon. sincerly your fanfic bro adon ;)

Great chapter dude im soooooooooooo glad your back. I freakin love your story to death. Keep on doin what you do

Well pinkie you have progressed from overly friendly to downright stalkerish. Good chapter and I hope you computer gets set up soon :)

welldone dude and um...did you make a reference to "cupcakes"

Wow he didn't waste any time getting in contact with Chrisalis

DUUUUUDE i love it and glad ur back. message me when u get the chance

Awese chapter

woo hoo! great job. cant wait to see what you have planed for the next chapter.

make the title flaming angel

Very exciting... cant wait to find out what happens next. keep it up!

OUCH a huge race coming up against Blazing angle this should be good to read in the next chapter anyway though awesome chapter still i'm impressed with this chapter and waiting for the update

wow sounds like this Mr. Fahrenheit is a real Jerk or Jackass his boys are about the same anyway awesome chapter