|Reviews for The Unsuspecting side of the Force|
| Guest chapter 11 . 4/20
Excllent story-telling. Please return yo it when you have a chanve. Charles Dalby
| PappyOldGuy chapter 11 . 4/19
Interesting companion to "The Havoc side of the Force" and (well enough written in my opinion) very good story. I like it, I like it a lot! It seems to be meshing the realities quite well, and I can hardly wait (but I will) to see where it all goes. I do know this, when someone who is not the creator of a character, writes about them, it is to have them do something that the creator doesn't want to or didn't think of. I know that I always think of my favorite characters doing things, I have never read of in books or seen them doing in movies. I think it is fantastic that others (here in "FanFiction") are actually writing their stories of what they want them to do in a "What If" world. For those who complain that the characters would not do this or that, forget them. You need to write this first for yourself, and then for the rest of us who do enjoy your take on what just might, could, should, would and probability (if a frog had wings, his ass wouldn't bump the ground nearly so often) can happen. I do know this as well, I am enjoying it and will follow it as long as you will write it. Also, do NOT feel pushed to post, sometimes the words and thoughts just flow and sometimes you have to cogitate for a bit. Just learn to let them grow at their own pace and those of us who appreciate them will be here to read them when they are posted.
Looking forward to the next post and thank you so much for sharing.
| Q chapter 11 . 4/18
If Darth Sidious was smart, he would get every Sith and Jedi and declare war against Harry Potter, declaring Captain Harry the wizard to be a abomination to the Force and order his extermination and then have both Empire and Republic hunt down Earth and exterminate the entire world...
| Amyethious chapter 11 . 4/16
I really like this as well as "The Havoc Side of the Force". I think some of these would be great included in the story but i also like how you get the main story from the main character while this is like sneak peaks behind the scenes that the main character isn't meant to know.
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter of both stories.
| robinshahonline chapter 11 . 4/16
Wow...thanks for sharing. One of the best stories in fanfiction universe. Hope to read more soon
| Donni chapter 11 . 4/4
Oh, the Chancellor's reaction at the end is just brilliant!
| Fallow53 chapter 11 . 3/27
xxx kudos xxx : )
| Bluesnowman chapter 11 . 3/25
| lexus4444 chapter 11 . 3/24
Nice chapter keeps me interested , next time.
| Guest chapter 11 . 3/23
Palpy fury at getting screwed over by Harry's idea of entertainment without him even noticing is pure comedy gold! :-D
| SmoulderS chapter 11 . 3/22
Awesome! Harry has truly unleashed a terrible weapon upon the Jedi, and also the Sith. When I was reading the conversation between Jinn and Anakin, when Jinn said that's not how the Jedi operate, I was thinking to myself, 'they are going to lose him again if they continue this way. Anakin's probably thinking, that's how Captain Harry operates.' Thank you for sharing!
| vonSchlieffen chapter 11 . 3/21
Poor Sidious, his plans are so elegant and manifold that he almost deserves to succeed. And you know, he would've gotten away with it all, too, if it weren't for those meddling kids! Also, who is he cloning? Maul, himself, his imprisoned witch? Intrigue abounds!
At any rate, Anakin is coming along beautifully, and I can't wait for his next reunion with Harry. I wonder how the kid will react to finding out that some Councillors are trying to assassinate his friend.
As a side note, I have to wonder how different the world would be if certain nefarious world leaders were sabotaged so that they too spoke in squeaky voices...
| Emperor Vanquest chapter 11 . 3/21
I love these little nuggets of plot development; wonderful chapter!
| Oh I am Slain chapter 11 . 3/20
so I did not punish you for painting the back of his head yellow."
Oh man, I cracked up at this when I realized the previous innocuous reference.
"That's not how the Jedi operate!"
Poor Qui-Gon. I'm hoping he and other Jedi will get moments of awesome occasionally too. /
And he had landed just in time to see their contrail as they headed into space.
Hehe. This amused me too. :)
" I can see why he he needs me;"
While somehwat of a relief,
| Bookmeister999 chapter 11 . 3/18
The hedgehog strikes again! That metaphor is actually quite hilarious and the fact that Aniken reused it seemed very apropos. 'Don't get into an ass kicking contest with the hedgehog' indeed.