I LOVE THIS! AWESOME!

ooh thats ominous :D keep up the good work!

Great stuff! Gave some much needed background.

Interesting

Two people? who is the other?

I wondered about what happened to belatrix. Will you update this until it's

Interesting. Hope to see more updates soon!

Whose the second person? Bella/Millicent? or HK?

Ah, yes, we had yet to hear of Bella.

I'm not sure whether she or Harry is the most dangerous. Harry in the hands of a clever, comprehending Palpatine would be one hell of a danger.

Ooooooo... Now I see why the women in his room screamed in pain on his apparation there. They were Jedi, weren't they?

By the way, the powerful surge caused by his appearance, enough to reverberate around the universe through the force was a bit too much. Unless you have some reason for it to be necessary... I hope this does not continue all the while. It would make him ridiculously powerful. Able to disable any force sensitive being by just incanting a spell near them and sending them to the floor in pain.

I like reading about the others thoughts. Would have been very happy to read it along with the rest of the story. But I can see your problem.

Two? oh my!

Very interesting partner story.
...and the only one getting things right is Anakin - and he will be probably ignored.
Very good description of the "Forcequake"
Thank you for writing.

Two people, I supose that means that Bella is there as well.

does HK count as a person cuz if not I cant wait to see when bella will show up and i wanna see her reactions to everything

Great fun, yes, unpredictable you are, hm, but good.