|Reviews for HLP2-Slytherin's Secrets|
| rmcsquared chapter 17 . 6/6
Really enjoying the story please write more I can't to read what happens next
| Blitzstrahl chapter 16 . 11/2/2014
That spell it mimic's a "brutal kick to the man sack", it's 7 syllables that's a really slow spell that's mandatory for female law enforcement and the like.
| Me chapter 17 . 5/15/2014
Suspense! Looking forward to the next update:-)
| Me chapter 1 . 5/15/2014
Haha! That's a funny thought, Snape having to give the "talk"
| conjure-at-your-own-risk chapter 17 . 4/9/2014
I'm using you as a reason to procrastinate.
Ooh! Letters and weird dreams. This is a good chapter to read.
The introduction of Dippy was cute. It's easy to imagine a young Snape scowling as a House-Elf is pushing a plate of cakes to him. Patricia, don't bleed. That's how people die on Fringe and Supernatural. This is Harry Potter, there's more creative ways to die...what is going on here...
And I really love the letters that Gryffin sent. It's adorable that he's getting close to Hagrid, and then the cuteness quickly turns to creepiness. Thanks for giving me the wiggins. It also does a good job with the theoretical plot hole—as if they could keep anything from Molly and Arthur. Can you only imagine her rage when she heard about Perrigrew?
My one complaint would be the 'your son' bit. Sounds a little too formal, but other than that I really like the chapter.
| HiddenReaderNinja chapter 17 . 4/6/2014
Fascinating! Excited for your next update!
| Saint Snape chapter 16 . 11/17/2013
Lockhart was always so slimy I always thought he looked like a perv. Can't believe ole Dumbles didn't want to look at her memory of it and then took points and gave her detention.
Oh no, she has that diary, that's not good.
| Aryssayla chapter 16 . 10/9/2013
eh - didn't dumbledore accept to watch Harriets memory? I am a bit confused...
what will they do with the diary? I hope she will show it to her uncle or at least tell him about it...
| Aryssayla chapter 15 . 10/9/2013
I think this fits Lockhart's character very well - good idea!
| Aryssayla chapter 14 . 10/9/2013
so Harriet has the diary now
| Aryssayla chapter 13 . 10/9/2013
oh - what does McGonagall want...
| Aryssayla chapter 11 . 10/9/2013
I liked that - an apologetic Pansy...
| Aryssayla chapter 10 . 10/9/2013
oh yes - Snape and Cassandra working together...
| Aryssayla chapter 9 . 10/9/2013
great - Professor Snape acting like the muggle professor...
| Aryssayla chapter 7 . 10/9/2013
well done, I liked it