|Reviews for Fable 3: Rise to the Crown|
| Kyliemagee chapter 3 . 11/23/2013
| Sir Jason Kidd Gray chapter 15 . 8/26/2013
I'm grateful that you didn't write a love scene, if it's not really your thing. It can become an overwrought disaster.
I liked the brevity of the wedding, but not Ben's interference. He seems like such a gentleman, that it's really tragic he would interfere. I can see him being heartbroken and Debbie cheering him up though.
Keep this story going! Let's wage war on the tyrant!
| Guest chapter 15 . 8/23/2013
Nicely done! I really like how you added in the hesitation that I believe every bride experiences on her wedding day. It was very sweet :) I do feel bad for poor Ben.
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/6/2013
I am really enjoying this story and the development between Elliot and your Nicolle. Keep up the great work and update soon!
| Guest chapter 14 . 8/3/2013
I like the comment from Mass Effect at the end there.
"What would I do without you?"
"You'll never find out."
Although, that might not have been your plan, but that's immediately what I thought of.
| Citygirl26 chapter 14 . 8/2/2013
I love the cuteness between Nicolle and Elliot and I can't wait for the wedding! Please update soon :)
| Sir Jason Kidd Gray chapter 13 . 7/16/2013
This was a great chapter! Your twist on the weight of the world mission was brilliantly written, and even though I personally anticipated some sort of injury from the fight, I was glad that Ben, Elliot, and Nicolle lived. Awesome job on the confrontation between Reaver and Nicolle! I'm anticipating the next time they interact because it was just great seeing them call out each other on moral depravity.
Will Ben go crazy over Nicolle? Just wondering because he is crushing on her and all.
Btw: Nicolle, since she isn't yet the monarch, should be addressed as "Your Highness" or "Her Highness" not "Majesty." It was on Fable wikia.
| Citygirl26 chapter 13 . 7/15/2013
Wow! I love it! More more :)
| Sir Jason Kidd Gray chapter 12 . 7/4/2013
Jealous Ben? That adds an interesting twist to this story, especially as Ben is a skilled marksman. It will be interesting to see what complications he creates.
| Storm's Shadow chapter 1 . 7/3/2013
| breakingelle chapter 12 . 7/2/2013
Oh gosh, Ben. This should be interesting. Can't wait for the final battle to go out between them. Excellent as always!
| breakingelle chapter 11 . 6/27/2013
Ahhh! Elliot! Glad he's back :3
| goddamn-it-haru chapter 11 . 6/26/2013
Oh my gosh xD I'm read two really good stories (yours and someone elses) who both end with cliffhangers! xD I'm dying here
| breakingelle chapter 10 . 6/20/2013
This is great. The hooded guy is Elliot right? Does he really have battle scars or is it an excuse to keep the hood on for another reason? I can't wait until they meet again!
| goddamn-it-haru chapter 10 . 6/19/2013
HOW DARE YOU LEAVE ME AT THAT...LOL jk xD I would never be that mean _ I absolutely love this story! I've been trying to find Elliott fanfic and I finally found one :) I just love Elliott and Ben Finn! Keep up the amazinf writing!