Reviews for Outsiders Looking In
The Rag Lady chapter 11 . 1/28
I really liked the idea you used in this story. One of my favorite parts of the first season was when the team was arguing with Zatanna standing right there. You did a really good job of writing this.
CosmicEssence chapter 11 . 1/11
I think GA was the least in character , although maybe Aquaman (though that could be construed to his happy happy news lol :P ). Wonder Woman was so in character I didn't like hers (I don't like her anyway always comes across as arrogant and snobbish to me so the fact you conveyed that...), Batman, Martian Manhunter and Red Tornado too...kinda hard to choose between them :D
Guest chapter 4 . 11/20/2016
Yay proud Daddy!Bats!
OrangeKing89 chapter 11 . 8/1/2016
This is an interesting series of snapshots. Are you going to have a plot point at some point to wrap it up?
Turtledude83 chapter 11 . 7/27/2016
I really love this story, and I love the way you portray the relationships between the team. I think Green Lantern Hal Jordan would be good for the next chapter because he's blunt. He wouldn't have the finesse of Red Tornado or the subtlety of Batman. I imagine he'd go, "Wait...are you doing that Martian talk-without-saying-anything thing? Are you?" But again, great story so far. Very original idea.
mysticmoon1331 chapter 11 . 9/14/2015
i really love this concept! if i ever get around to actually finishing a ff (and posting it) would you mind if i used the idea?

i really loved this story! thank you so much for writing it and sharing it here! this is totally my new head canon! :D
123izabell chapter 11 . 6/26/2015
I like your story but I also noticed the note: they don't work like a family anymore, heck they don't even talk to each other unless missions, reports, or just need to. (They should haven't put the 5 year gap we could have seen what pulled them apart)
Lexy31 chapter 11 . 10/16/2014
nice story.
Resident Evil Lionhart chapter 11 . 8/10/2014
What about Green Lantern? Does he not exist during the time period this is based?
Alya Rose chapter 11 . 7/23/2014
This story is so cool. I love how you explore the mental link, most authors ignore it. If you wanted to do another chapter I think it would be cool if you had someone not in the league notice how the team acts.

-Alya Rose
Archive Trawler chapter 11 . 6/7/2014
It actually took me forever to find this story again, I'd read it when you first posted, but life happened. Considering I could only remember vague details from the summary, It took me a while ;) I had to Google it, bottom of the first page with "young justice fanfiction the team's mind link". I was surprised I found it, Anyway thanks for posting I always did like this story and how brilliant your writing was :) Worth reading (on my 6th time through).
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Smoochynose chapter 11 . 12/18/2013
This series of oneshots are so good. I love outsider looking in stories in general but you really hit the nail on the head with this. :)
DemonCry chapter 11 . 9/5/2013
What if you did a villains perspective?
Shadowed Violin chapter 11 . 8/20/2013
This story is awesome! I know you said you finished it, but what if the team and the league were in the same room, and suddenly the team shouts out Robin or something- he's in Gotham fighting baddies- then Martian Manhunter connects the league to the teams mind link, and watch as Robin and the team work In 'one body', to take down the baddies? Like Robin is fighting and Artemis says duck, then left hook...I dunno, just an idea... Great story! (:
Kelly Marsh chapter 7 . 7/24/2013
Love your story. But I really wanted to say that Roy and Kaldur are like BFFs. Sorry, I just get annoyed when people make that mistake. He only told Roy about Tula and Garth. He called Roy his 'best friend on the surface world'. They're totally BFFs.
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