Reviews for The Gap
Capricorn75 chapter 3 . 12/29/2012
Banter...my favorite type of foreplay.

Okay, that's a lie. Nothing beats a guy going down on you. But if you're in public- and not into exhibitionism- then banter is the way to go.
Capricorn75 chapter 2 . 12/29/2012
Hmmm, so just what is your story, Edward? Where do you call home?
radar1230 chapter 5 . 12/29/2012
I'm intrigued. Great banter between Bella and Edward.
Looking forward to reading more. :D
Capricorn75 chapter 1 . 12/29/2012
"Just this once"- I so hope that it's NOT just this once :-)
helenemc chapter 5 . 12/29/2012
Great story so far. Looking forward for more.
maphie chapter 5 . 12/29/2012
Wow! That hit me like a subway train! No pressure but I would die for another hit because this story is like a fucking drug.
Edward's Eternal chapter 5 . 12/29/2012
Another great chapter... but I am caught up... need more please.
Edward's Eternal chapter 4 . 12/29/2012
UH oh... there is feelings already. On his side at least...
Oldenuf2knobeta chapter 5 . 12/29/2012
Really enjoying this. Can't wait for an update.
goldseadragon chapter 4 . 12/28/2012
These two are so delightful!
Lesley282 chapter 5 . 12/28/2012
Love this
Please please please please update soon!
MyHubbyIsATwilightWidow chapter 5 . 12/28/2012
Liking this so far. Can't wait to see where you take it.
Thanks for writing.
Edward's Eternal chapter 3 . 12/28/2012
Love their banter!
Excellent!
Edward's Eternal chapter 2 . 12/28/2012
Wow - these two are both intense - in their own way.
Excellent!
Edward's Eternal chapter 1 . 12/28/2012
Excellent first chapter! Intriguing!
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