Reviews for The Gap
Wardrob07 chapter 9 . 1/21/2014
At least he had told her before benefit, even it was on the way there... I think she will forgive him all his fortune LOL
Wardrob07 chapter 8 . 1/21/2014
Benefit will be a mess. Edward better tell her while on time
siren of titan chapter 17 . 1/20/2014
welp...been a long time been a long time been a ...
Wardrob07 chapter 7 . 1/20/2014
Sweet, but I'm sensing troubles soon...Oh well
Wardrob07 chapter 6 . 1/20/2014
Emmet is so screwed lol
Wardrob07 chapter 5 . 1/20/2014
They came to conclusion pretty fast :))
Wardrob07 chapter 4 . 1/20/2014
Well isn't she just a mood killer? Couldn't she just shut up and enjoy it? I guess not
Wardrob07 chapter 3 . 1/20/2014
Lovely benter. It has been a long time since I read sth this cute :)
Wardrob07 chapter 2 . 1/20/2014
It was still risky to show him where she lives, he could be crazy stalker as far as she knows.
Is he really homeless?
Wardrob07 chapter 1 . 1/20/2014
I'll start my evening with this one ;)
And to say right away, I love dialogue, I love when characters talk for a change ;)))
roxymar chapter 17 . 1/10/2014
Aww, things are looking up. I'm glad they are working things out. They both admitted to strong feelings.
Great job!
Roxy
obsessedreader31 chapter 17 . 12/30/2013
I realize I'm a little late to this party, but wow! I'm looking forward to watching the Cullen's, and Bella,hand Jacob his ass on a platter! Keep up the great work! Looking forward to the next chapter. -Erin
Rita01tx chapter 17 . 12/21/2013
You've lightened my heart with this chapter! I was so afraid there was no goin' back from all the previous madness LOL!
xxislandsxx chapter 16 . 12/20/2013
I've enjoyed your story. I love the interaction between this Bella and this Edward. In particular to this chapter, the situation with Bella is really sad and maddening but I thoroughly enjoyed the interaction between Carlisle and Edward. I'm glad to know that their relationship runs deeper and what was said before was because of something short-term. It was insightful to know the reasons behind their actions towards one another. thank you!
fatpotatoe chapter 17 . 12/15/2013
Long wait. Great story.
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