|Reviews for Halloween Party|
| jacpin2002 chapter 1 . 8/20/2017
I loved it! For it being both, their first time they had a lot of fun.
| angel897 chapter 1 . 1/17/2017
interesting to read, rather hot lucky girl
| Madame Red Wolf chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
wow i really like it.
| KittyKatNeko1996 chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
tht waz amazing!:3
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
AWWWWW so cute and pretty damn funny too evil girls *.*
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
i wish it was a story it was one of the best on shot lemons i have ever read
| Nymphomaniatic chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
You know how to write loin burning fanfictions.
Quite a sin-sational read.
| blackbutterbly1997 chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
| Mary Mab chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
well it started slow but was good, then got better with the costume fix... then the games really helped and...ah ...god ... loved the ending absolutely loved it
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
lot of mistake but really nice good job, Are you going to continue?
| ali5ma chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
dam that was one well thought out story and one well thought out lemon scene and ending i must give you props for this story made me blush and this marks my third time blushing ever
| Frenchie121 chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
That was a good 1shot. But I think you could actually make it into a longer story because it was that good.
| FallenInDreams chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
Very awesome - love the idea. It could use a STRONG douse of editing "magic" quite frankly, but was otherwise entertaining. :)
| Kolodo chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
It s a good story, but please, use punctuation marks! Periods, commas. I was running out of breath reading some sentences!
| AnjuHime chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Woah... I have to say... I really love this story! :D
This was an awesome GaaSaku... 33 Really great!