Reviews for Halloween Party
jacpin2002 chapter 1 . 8/20/2017
I loved it! For it being both, their first time they had a lot of fun.
angel897 chapter 1 . 1/17/2017
interesting to read, rather hot lucky girl
Madame Red Wolf chapter 1 . 2/6/2013
wow i really like it.
KittyKatNeko1996 chapter 1 . 1/25/2013
tht waz amazing!:3
Guest chapter 1 . 1/14/2013
AWWWWW so cute and pretty damn funny too evil girls *.*
Guest chapter 1 . 12/31/2012
i wish it was a story it was one of the best on shot lemons i have ever read
Nymphomaniatic chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
Oh wow.
You know how to write loin burning fanfictions.
Quite a sin-sational read.
blackbutterbly1997 chapter 1 . 11/26/2012
sweet
Mary Mab chapter 1 . 11/22/2012
well it started slow but was good, then got better with the costume fix... then the games really helped and...ah ...god ... loved the ending absolutely loved it
Guest chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
lot of mistake but really nice good job, Are you going to continue?
ali5ma chapter 1 . 10/24/2012
dam that was one well thought out story and one well thought out lemon scene and ending i must give you props for this story made me blush and this marks my third time blushing ever
Frenchie121 chapter 1 . 10/18/2012
That was a good 1shot. But I think you could actually make it into a longer story because it was that good.
FallenInDreams chapter 1 . 10/16/2012
Very awesome - love the idea. It could use a STRONG douse of editing "magic" quite frankly, but was otherwise entertaining. :)
Kolodo chapter 1 . 10/9/2012
It s a good story, but please, use punctuation marks! Periods, commas. I was running out of breath reading some sentences!
AnjuHime chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Woah... I have to say... I really love this story! :D
This was an awesome GaaSaku... 33 Really great!