|Reviews for The Lost Tower|
| Caerulei chapter 1 . 10/16/2013
I adore the cast of characters you introduced here! Eithne and Falx's interactions are particularly enjoyable. Also, Keir is a very fun character to read and for once an asura has captured by undivided attention with his dialogue.
One suggestion to make this chapter 20% better, put scene breaks in! Like a ##### or a line, it makes it less jarring when changing scenes.
It's a shame the Foundation group disbanded, but I'm still writing my story from it, and I'm glad to see others doing the same, so the Foundation is still alive in these stories.
| blauherz chapter 1 . 11/5/2012
a decent fanfiction, and a guild wars one to boot!
i even had trouble translating and had to check SO MANY words!
which is a good thing and didnt happen to me in weeks, months?
id absolutely love another chapter
your charakters are interestig, as is your style of writing
and i could imagine having a quest like that in GW2
if there isnt that is
please keep up the great work!