Reviews for The Lightning Monk
AnimeFreak71777 chapter 6 . 10/18/2014
Please update! :D
Guest chapter 1 . 6/21/2014
Horrible
Guest chapter 1 . 6/21/2014
How is he born 2 years after they separated and before why are they called uzumaki when there affinity is lightning and where did the chakra reserves come from
Guest chapter 2 . 6/15/2014
If he can't use the fox then your story sucks
WeberCode chapter 6 . 6/15/2014
sequel, please
angel11xpr chapter 6 . 1/30/2014
Good chapter, please update soon
Guest chapter 6 . 1/11/2014
This is great I hope that you update soon can't wait to see mintos face when he finds out about naruto.
Demoninside2 chapter 6 . 11/30/2013
wow nice story
agnar chapter 3 . 10/23/2013
And this ends the road on this fic for me. You claim naruto is chunin to low jonin, then have him kill zabuza and haku like they're civilians, because you 'don't need them' in the fic. Well then don't fucking include them or don't do the WAVE mission you moron!

You then go and have Gato hiring an S-rank missing nin? Bullshit! Gato hires nins he knows he can overwhelm and kill off with his thugs, he hires quantity not quality because he's a fucking cheap skate, he does NOT hire S rank fucking missing nins because they can destroy entire villages alone, he'd NEVER pay out that kind of money.

And frankly the entire fucking inclusion of team 7 from Konoha, Naruto being his own team without even a jonin sensei, it's all badly done, unbelievable, and just screams childish. Team 7 is only there so you can weigh it down with lots of unneeded bashing, taking away from the fics storyline. That's obvious from the BS with Sasuke 'the last Uchiha' who isn't the last and isn't the best, people of Konoha would NOT be all kissing his ass because he's Fugaku's kid because Fugaku wasn't that fucking famous OR strong. He was an A-rank ninja at best, his wife could probably kick his ass.

The idea wasn't bad, your production though, needs lots of work.
agnar chapter 1 . 10/23/2013
The only problem I saw here was, both teams can't leave the gate to escort Naruto to the Raikage. At least one team needs to stay, or just anyone could walk in while they're gone.

What if it was a trick, Naruto comes in, they all show him to the tower, and the 10 spies following him sneak in while the gate is unguarded! :)
luketzoner chapter 6 . 10/8/2013
nice fic, there aren't many with naruto and mabui.
can't wait for the next chapter.
peace
Dregus chapter 6 . 9/16/2013
the destructo disk of al thigns? good lord.
redwolf23456 chapter 6 . 7/11/2013
great story so far
Ice Night chapter 6 . 7/3/2013
Pretty good story
StrongGuy159 chapter 5 . 7/2/2013
Cool story continue please.
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