|Reviews for Two Lands|
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/3
Nintendo said that daisy was peach's sister
| bekbekah92 chapter 10 . 12/8/2012
| 7th-Sinner chapter 10 . 12/7/2012
I really love this story. It is very emotional, and it would be interesting to read about Daisy and Peach's relationship from a different angle. Please, keep up.
Oh, and you might have mistaken chapter ten and nine.
| bekbekah92 chapter 9 . 11/19/2012
Plz continue great story
| iSqueakers chapter 9 . 11/19/2012
This is sad :(
But the plot is great so far, keep it up!
| bekbekah92 chapter 6 . 10/27/2012
Aww i feel bad for peach and daisy plz update soon
| Lolcano chapter 4 . 10/11/2012
aaaw, soooo cute. :) I really like it! The end is so sweet! The only thing I'd add is that the last line there should be the start of a new paragraph.
| Lolcano chapter 2 . 10/9/2012
wooow, interesting! I looks like this is going to be a very exciting story! I like the idea of how Peach and Daisy are sisters and its so cute. There are a few spelling mistakes. Just run it through spell-check and it'll be fixed. Also, sometimes the sentances are a little jerky, but I think a smoother style comes with time. Keep on writing! I like your story and can't wait to see what happens next.