|Reviews for What would happen?|
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/26/2014
The plot is quite good, but the way you organize that in your story isn't. I truly hope you will overcome that problem in future chapters. Good luck with the fanfiction.
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/31/2014
| Lolz chapter 1 . 6/26/2013
Ooo so good! Keep going!
| Guest chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
I like it please continue! :)
| Dauphin Noire chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
That was an interesting alternative. Though I prefer the original one, I would have love to see that one too..