|Reviews for Don't Breathe|
| Harmony chapter 3 . 5/13/2014
You have an interesting story going here...keep it going!
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/5/2013
Gahhhhh update soon
| vampdreams chapter 3 . 4/2/2013
i'm loving it...its really good
keep up the good fun work
can't wait to read more..plz update quick
| FebeA chapter 3 . 4/1/2013
All of a sudden Bella already surpassed his insanity to vampires? So fast? Maybe I should have another episode or something that amounts to heal from trauma is not as fast and easy. It's really complicated.
But I liked a lot and plan to continue reading.
| xodreamalittledreamxo chapter 3 . 4/1/2013
Great chapter. Update again soon
| Lionnara chapter 3 . 3/31/2013
woah thats pretty close.
| TimelessReader chapter 3 . 3/31/2013
Interesting take, can't wait to see what will happen next.
| HARRILIL chapter 2 . 12/31/2012
loving this chapter!i really do it has a great sence of forshadowing :)!
| BlueEyedKlutz chapter 2 . 12/29/2012
Can't wait to read more :)
| geri preston chapter 2 . 12/28/2012
I love it and i want to read more
| T chapter 2 . 12/28/2012
Its great. Update soon.
| MsKMJ chapter 2 . 12/27/2012
Wonderfully awesome chapter! I can't wait for more!
| Bergnation chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
I enjoyed the first chapter. It has a decent set up and definately leaves you wanting to know what happens next. I love the angle you are taking too.
| iluvtwilight93 chapter 1 . 12/1/2012
Rly interesting story so far :)
Hope u update soon!
| bloodredeclipse chapter 1 . 11/1/2012
Awesome so far! Can't wait until next chapter!