|Reviews for My Lord|
| Angelica Bustle chapter 1 . 12/24/2016
First of all, I would like to tell you that you're probably the best writer on FanFiction when it comes to Johnny Depp. Some weeks ago, I started to make a list with stories I might read in the future and I started with Johnny Depp characters, mostly Jack Sparrow and John Wilmot. I realized that most of them were written by you and the ones I truly liked were only by you. So, indeed, you are talented.
I liked 'Profitable Affairs' the most, as a JS story, and I noticed that the plot was very full and unexpected, something everybody is looking for in a good book. I liked your other JS stories as well, but that one really got me.
Now, when talking about John Wilmot, you are even better. I could see a very big progress from your previous stories. 'Silk & Lace' was very interesting, although the interruption of the story-line was a bit odd.
Regarding this one, 'My Lord', it is truly the perfect book online and I put it in an honorable place in my mind. I liked how you managed to surprise me with every chapter. There was one time when I thought the story was going to end or to be interrupted - as the other one -, because I thought it had only 27 chapters. I was already thinking that, indeed, you couldn't have any more inspiration than that, for nothing came into my mind about a possible future chapter. When I discovered that there are, in fact, 37 chapters and read through the following one, I realized just how amazing you are and how wonderfully surprising your imagination can be. The way you combine accurate historical facts with your own ideas is marvellous and you also succeed in keeping John in character. Alexandra is very original and a wonderful person, without being a Mary Sue at all. There were times when I felt like her and other times when I seriously wanted to bang her head against the nearest wall. It is very important that you made her human. Because, believe me, she is very human, without having only flaws or only qualities. The quotes at the beginning of every chapter made me very curious about the Earl's writings - since I am still not necessarily a fan, just someone who respects him and his mind very much - and I started to read several of his poems and I must say that my favourite is 'A Satyr against Reason and Mankind'.
What is truly a shame, though, is that you quit writing. I read this on your FB account and I'm really disappointed that there will be no other stories. What I must ask of you to keep writing, at least this this story, for I believe that 'My Lord' is one of the best and deepest books, of yours and on FanFiction. Since it's approaching its end, you should at least finish what you've started, don't leave us all in this great suspense!
You have a beautiful mind and spirit, Lina. Don't let them get wasted. :)
| Guest chapter 37 . 5/9/2016
Please update soon.
| Guest chapter 37 . 12/13/2015
Please review I keep reading the story over and over!
| The Psyche of Azarath chapter 1 . 10/3/2015
This is the most random thing I have ever done.
I am not in this fandom, never even heard of it before, but when I saw that the main male character in you story shares my name I was so excited. I'll make it a point to get into this fandom ASAP. And I have you to thank!
| kellbells chapter 37 . 7/27/2015
Love this! I hope you update soon.
| JARAT chapter 37 . 5/22/2015
I didn't know where to post this comment but since this was the last story of yours that I have read and have been eagerly awaiting more, it seemed fitting. I read on your page that you are not planning to write anymore. I do not know if this is a temporary or permanent decision. I understand well enough how hectic life came become and how priorities inevitably shift. I am a thirty something wife, mother of three, returning student and, way down at the bottom of the list, an artist. My creative side has had to take a backseat for more than a decade to raise my children but I could never give up on it completely. Now that my kids are older I can once again focus on my artwork.
I must tell you that I have read A LOT of fanfiction and enjoy a great deal of it but I am particular about which stories/ authors I favor. You are one of my favorites and one of the best writers I have had the privilege to read. Why are you not doing this professionally? You quitting writing is like Rembrandt tossing his brushes into the river or Bach deciding he'd rather study law. I am not trying to pressure you but instead pay you a high compliment. I just wanted you to know you have a gift for writing and even if it must be resigned to the backseat for now I hope you will take it up again in the future. Maybe even finish some of your brilliant fanfiction stories for your devoted fans/followers?
| tacobell1 chapter 37 . 1/7/2015
I can't wait for update. I like your stories. U should think about writing a story for phantom of the opera.
| Kale chapter 37 . 11/18/2014
I've been having such a delightful time reading this story! It's brilliant! I seriously can't get enough of it haha.
I've been an eager reader of your stories featuring Johnny Depp, and was just wondering if you've also written a fanfic for the movie The Astronaut's Wife?
| Sparrowsvixon90 chapter 37 . 10/25/2014
Loving the rising story you've got here. And I adore the obvious fascination he has with her. Can't wait to see what's going on!
| Gary the Snail x3 chapter 37 . 10/20/2014
Awe! I'm soo glad Charles saw Alexandra! I'm conflicted. I don't know how to feel about the earl right now. I was upset when I found out it was longer than two weeks since he's seen her. It was almost a month! Now they'r together and nothing is fixed! I did feel bad for Mary but right now she and the King are incredibly big nuisance. I just want them gone and I want the earl and Alexandra to get their happily ever after. Is that too much to ask for!? Jeez, stupid monarchies. anyway sorry for reviewing late and thank you for updating this! Can't wait for your next update! :D
| dionne dance chapter 37 . 10/11/2014
Great chapter! It would seem that Mary is no fool! And you've left us with a cliffie! John is living even closer to the edge than normal.
| TinkerbellxO chapter 37 . 10/7/2014
I have no idea what he's hiding but I'm so thrilled you've written a new chapter of this story. I know I probably say this about all your works but this is my favorite!
Can't wait for more love!
| Jamberine chapter 37 . 10/6/2014
Ahhhhh! you always finish your chapters at the most inconvenient times! shame on you for writing brilliant chapter endings!
| Peaches chapter 37 . 10/5/2014
I don't know what he's hiding but I really want to know! Great job!
| OptimusPrimegirl213 chapter 37 . 10/5/2014
Never seen the movie but ill read and maybe ill watch the movie anyway good work