|Reviews for The Loyalty|
| Elise Deschat chapter 1 . 8/24
Perfect ending...all that mush, not Sam/Ed, but the ultimate "love of brothers"
| Andorian Ice Princess-AIP chapter 1 . 11/13/2012
Oh gosh..today we lost a young RCMP to a t-bone it was horrible so am glad this had a happy ending for my beloved Eddie. Of course Ed would never leave Sam behind but the ending was funny. dang driving skills. Thanks again for another enjoyable read! Okay I better get back to my muse before she gets jealous haha thanks again my dear!
| Pennie Borton chapter 1 . 10/13/2012
Greetings from Iowa,
Good story so far so please continue. I also like the last few lines. I can picture Ed's expression. Lol!
Thank you and have a great weekend!
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/12/2012
"Finally Sam nodded in resigned" - should be "in resignation"
"The unis is putting up a roadblock" is putting up a roadblock. Really? Didn't you learn proper grammar in school? It's are putting up a roadblock
"Sam and I are on pursuit" - should be "in" pursuit
"Lifting his foot of the gas" - should be off the gas"
Please fix the typos and proofread better in the future.
| Guest chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
i like the part now it does prove something what your driveing is bad
| Scat210 chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Nice, Sam whump always appreciated, love Ed and Sam friendship!
| PhoenixWytch chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
LOL I love Ed and Sam. They are just... Ugh! I cannot think of the right word. Ed is so very loyal, same with Sam. Love, love, love this!
Thanks for writing and sharing.
| sammygirl1963 chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
Awesome oneshot. Loved the fact that Ed refused to leave Sam, even though it could have cost him his own life!
| gabbygirl89 chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
Great story! I enjoyed it!
| sloop3000 chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
awesome fic :) and don't worry, we never get tired of you!
| J9yee chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
| JoaniB chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
And that is why I don't drive in TO. I really enjoyed the story, thanks!
| dawnpritchard66 chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
great chapter xx