Just realized Clarie is just carlie spelled differently

have i mentioned before that i decided to read this when you called someone a "trill-ass homie" in the AN? because i did.

Excellent story. It looked like it was going to be over when we weren’t even halfway through the chapter count but then it just got better and better. Loved the twist at the end.

Well, duh! Renesme of course! The answer to the who the hell are you question is that Rose asked— she’s no one of importance.

Well I am completely in awe over James’ death. She said her piece and let him suffer in fear before being burned alive (well half alive) With his penis cut off he wouldn’t have lived for that long anyway. It also seems that Carlisle DID have a bit of fun with James after all. Almost makes up for what he did to Bella on Thanksgiving. I could tell even as I read that chapter that when Carlisle found out what exactly was in that file, he was disgusted, probably with himself a bit. I had the feeling he would want to exact revenge on James. Good job, well written. I think the best part was that Bella didn’t SHOOT James, she burned him. Although I think she should have covered him in the gas also, Just to be on the safe side.

Ok, so who knows where James took Bella when he kidnapped her? It’s probably in the records of the case. Bella and Jasper know. Edward knows the name of the place but he can probably find it very easily. I think Bella and “G” (who I think is Garrett) will go there to hunt down James, but as soon as Jasper realizes she is missing, he’s gonna know from overhearing her conversation with Edward where to go to find James. He heard her answer to the question about Tishomingo and Jasper is a smart cookie - he’ll figure it out and meet them there, and I think Edward and Carlisle and all of his entourage will not be too far behind. There is NO WAY any of those men will allow Bella to be in this alone. I wish them all well. I just hope Bella gets to be the one to actually kill that bastard. I hope she can hurt him first too. He deserves SLOW AND PAINFUL - He repeatedly raped a child. He should be completely immobilized (as in all of his limbs broken in several places, beyond him being able to move) covered in honey and left to be eaten by ants and other insects. And that may be too good for him.

Ruh-Roh Shaggy! Wow, she was try to do some shifty stuff and bit herself in the foot! Now she’ll be worried about all the stress and not seeing or being able to tell Edward.

This is a no-brainer - Jasper knows Alice from before and is in love with her. He stays away because he thinks he’s either not good enough for her or because of her family.

That was laugh out loud funny. I can tell Emmett is gonna be a character in this story.

I loved the Epilog . This was an awesome story.

I loved that C;aire finally spoke.

Love the chapter. That Carmen is a mess.

Im proud of Edward for getting himself in check with Bella.

I hope Edward Will understand. Claire just needs some time, and to see a child therapist. Im sure Tose would let her wear what she wanted if she only knew.

LOved that Charlie was remorseful and wanted a relationship with Bella, Edward and the babies. I cant wait to meet Claire.