This gave me all the right amount of emotions to feel. Just loved it. Thanks for sharing!

The police might not have taken Bella seriously years ago but there is no way in hell they would turn a blind eye to the situation. The fact that she thinks they would doesn’t make her sound too smart. A wanted convicted criminal coming back for his prior victim and it’s on tape... there is no way that would be ignored.
Love a lethal Jasper, so hot even though I like him better with dark hair.

This story was good and I enjoyed it for the most part. A little to gun-nutty. Teaching a child who has obviously experienced trauma to use a BB gun at such a young age seems... odd. Perhaps she should’ve been I. Therapy instead of gun school with Bella. One of the reasons I really don’t like to read pregnancy stories is because Bella becomes boring. That happened around the 25th chapter Mark

You wouldn't say "Jasper gave I an apologetic smile," so don't say "Jasper gave Alice and I an apologetic smile." Use ME. "Jasper gave Alice and me an apologetic smile."

It's PER SE (Latin), not PER SAY.

It's "break it up, you TWO," not "you too"

It's "beck and call," not "beckon call." LOL.

It's "THROES of passion," not THROWS.

"with whom she had moved in with" It's just "with whom she moved in" or "whom she had moved in with."

Omg how did I forget this story.
Killer midget Alice would make a great story

I forgot about that that song was in this fic :(

Omg that’s the funniest chapter I have ever read! Loved it

SEQUELLLLLLLL, PLEASE. I LOVED YOUR HISTORY SO MUCHO

Please consider doing the sequel as I’ve lost count how many times I’ve read this and I love it every time

Love it