Reviews for Color Me Once
Guest chapter 17 . 7/24
I like the fic so far. Though, I think they're both at some fault at this point. Instead of breaking his heart and going along with Jeffs blackmail (which was really weird he could pull off. Why wouldn't she show the wound and go to the police? Thats a way better call than telling Jake to fuck off.) Then to look from Jakes view I would have been livid too. Girlfriend suddenly has to break things off and then you see a naked man in her bed? A naked man she just told you she loved? He'd have to be dense to think they didn't bang. He went way too far though. He said inexcusable things, and immediately going to bang another girl is awful. Don't know how they'll recover from it.
Guest chapter 16 . 1/30
As for question 2, I agree with Leon. Even though Jake would never hurt Sherry physically, Leon sees no difference between physical abuse or verbal abuse. Either way, you're hurt. The only actual difference between the two is that verbally it hurts you mentally, and some people hide it better than others. It's still no excuse, but, hey, we all make mistakes such as that, we're human. Anyway, even though Leon has his doubts, he makes a good point when he points out that calling someone a slut or using something against someone that is far beyond a person's control, out of anger, doesn't make it okay. I would forgive someone of such actions, and even though, I don't think I ever forget, I would push it aside and move forward
Guest chapter 16 . 1/30
Well, given that no one is perfect, when someone feels hurt or betrayed, usually, words are exchanged and then the after the rage has subsided, and ones head is clear, it's normal to think about the hurt and feel guilty. I don't agree with the verbal abuse used towards Sherry, but, she was under duress, and Jake just overreacted. You shouldn't judge one so quickly, especially if this person is someone you know rather well. Jake saw through Sherry's lie, and his instincts kicked in overdrive. When one doesn't like to admit a loved one has control over your emotions, when hurt, that person lashes out because it, well, I guess in a way it makes you vulnerable. However, it don't make it okay, no matter how much you lash out, the hurt will be there. Love can ruin you. Anger can destroy you
Guest chapter 25 . 12/24/2015
This was fucking amazing.
Raven chapter 11 . 12/19/2015
So far I've read 1-10. And I love it. You are doing an amazing job I love this story so much
Sin chapter 25 . 12/7/2015
I can't believe I finally stumbled over your story 2 years later. Jake and Sherry where very authentic, a hell of a good read, fluent, just *thumbs up* thx for writing such an awesome story.

Kindest regards
The random guy from Austria xD
dirtdiver60 chapter 1 . 11/18/2015
Wooah such a long fiction ! But, just one thing : you wrote on Jake's Mother but she's dead since a long time. That's why he became a mercenary.
KennedyVictor chapter 17 . 10/25/2015
Sнerry dιd тнe WRONG тнιng. Loverѕ ғιgнт . тнey мaĸe υp. Wнaт'ѕ a good relaтιonѕнιp wιтнoυт a ғιgнт. And ѕнerry ιѕ lυcĸy тнaт ѕнe нaѕ a мan тo proтecт нer. Well нad. I'м on Jaĸe'ѕ ѕιde. 100%
Gessica chapter 25 . 9/15/2015
Hey!
Oh, my God... I just finished Color me Once and I feel like there's a hole in my chest! I've spent the last week reading it and I've grown fond (I mean, even more) of Jake and Sherry and now I feel this emptiness because it's over :(
I know that every story has to come to an end, but I really didn't wanted this one to end. I accept the ending though lol Of course, if you ever feel like writing a second part of it, I would read it happily (more than happily actually!)
So, congrats! I loved it ;)

Oh, and your writing reminds me of mine (except that I write in portuguese lol)

XO
Anna chapter 19 . 1/4/2015
OmG jus for a second it reminded me of lost . I mean come on Daniel faraday , juliet burke
Tini chapter 17 . 1/3/2015
If I knew I could reviewed as not a member , I would have done it on all chapters .xxx
Tini chapter 15 . 1/3/2015
God yr such an amazing writer Everything u write is just what i like to read !
Hheleon chapter 3 . 1/3/2015
Wow this is really my favorite type of thing .
Tini chapter 19 . 1/3/2015
This story is amazing
Lia chapter 25 . 1/1/2015
I really loved all the little moments that jake and sherry shared it was vary humorous and I loved reading this you did the game justice hope you keep writing your very good at it!
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