Reviews for Color Me Once
andrew chapter 8 . 2/13
love this chapter very creative
sarara1.8 chapter 25 . 7/3/2017
I just realized that you also wrote the story I read before this.
Both your stories where really interesting, though I have to admit that this story got me a bit conflicted with their relationship
sarara1.8 chapter 16 . 7/3/2017
You know, you build up a pretty complicated relationship to begin with. I'm always for strong women and not backing down, but sherry has done some stupid things. I guess Jakes reaction fits rather well with how you portrayed him so far (a little to aggresive and hot headed for me actually) Maybe his words were a bit to much, but I don't think anyone would have staed calm there
Adonna2424 chapter 25 . 1/16/2017
This was really fantastic! I couldn't put it down and (god I'll be sleep deprived in the morning for work) is completely worth the read through. Fav'd and Followed!
Guest chapter 25 . 12/31/2016
This was an amazing read and I think you're a great author.
Guest chapter 6 . 12/29/2016
I know I'm pretty late to the party here but I wanted you to know that I'm loving your work and any stop reading. You're a great author
HindyBirkin chapter 17 . 10/6/2016
chapter 17 sad for mercy
Guest chapter 17 . 7/24/2016
I like the fic so far. Though, I think they're both at some fault at this point. Instead of breaking his heart and going along with Jeffs blackmail (which was really weird he could pull off. Why wouldn't she show the wound and go to the police? Thats a way better call than telling Jake to fuck off.) Then to look from Jakes view I would have been livid too. Girlfriend suddenly has to break things off and then you see a naked man in her bed? A naked man she just told you she loved? He'd have to be dense to think they didn't bang. He went way too far though. He said inexcusable things, and immediately going to bang another girl is awful. Don't know how they'll recover from it.
Guest chapter 16 . 1/30/2016
As for question 2, I agree with Leon. Even though Jake would never hurt Sherry physically, Leon sees no difference between physical abuse or verbal abuse. Either way, you're hurt. The only actual difference between the two is that verbally it hurts you mentally, and some people hide it better than others. It's still no excuse, but, hey, we all make mistakes such as that, we're human. Anyway, even though Leon has his doubts, he makes a good point when he points out that calling someone a slut or using something against someone that is far beyond a person's control, out of anger, doesn't make it okay. I would forgive someone of such actions, and even though, I don't think I ever forget, I would push it aside and move forward
Guest chapter 16 . 1/30/2016
Well, given that no one is perfect, when someone feels hurt or betrayed, usually, words are exchanged and then the after the rage has subsided, and ones head is clear, it's normal to think about the hurt and feel guilty. I don't agree with the verbal abuse used towards Sherry, but, she was under duress, and Jake just overreacted. You shouldn't judge one so quickly, especially if this person is someone you know rather well. Jake saw through Sherry's lie, and his instincts kicked in overdrive. When one doesn't like to admit a loved one has control over your emotions, when hurt, that person lashes out because it, well, I guess in a way it makes you vulnerable. However, it don't make it okay, no matter how much you lash out, the hurt will be there. Love can ruin you. Anger can destroy you
Guest chapter 25 . 12/24/2015
This was fucking amazing.
Raven chapter 11 . 12/19/2015
So far I've read 1-10. And I love it. You are doing an amazing job I love this story so much
Sin chapter 25 . 12/7/2015
I can't believe I finally stumbled over your story 2 years later. Jake and Sherry where very authentic, a hell of a good read, fluent, just *thumbs up* thx for writing such an awesome story.

Kindest regards
The random guy from Austria xD
dirtdiver60 chapter 1 . 11/18/2015
Wooah such a long fiction ! But, just one thing : you wrote on Jake's Mother but she's dead since a long time. That's why he became a mercenary.
KennedyVictor chapter 17 . 10/25/2015
Sнerry dιd тнe WRONG тнιng. Loverѕ ғιgнт . тнey мaĸe υp. Wнaт'ѕ a good relaтιonѕнιp wιтнoυт a ғιgнт. And ѕнerry ιѕ lυcĸy тнaт ѕнe нaѕ a мan тo proтecт нer. Well нad. I'м on Jaĸe'ѕ ѕιde. 100%
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