|Reviews for Sunrise|
| 5x10 Love chapter 1 . 10/10/2012
*Gasp* All of my feels! All I could say throughout this entire chapter was, "D'AWWWWWWWWWW!"
I'm gonna have to go back and read "10" again to get the characters straight. I remember reading it, but some of the details are fuzzy.
My 10: That's probably because you were reading it at, like, 2 in the morning.
Me: Shhhh! *Puts hand over her mouth* Anywho...Loved this chapter. So adorable. :3
My 10: Mmmphffff!
Me: She agrees. :)
My 10: *Nods*
| Freida Right chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
This is adorable! 19 reminds me of my littlest brother, who IS six now. The way little children say thing... Inconceivable!
I see what you mean about the last line. Actually, now that I see it in context, I would consider removing it entirely. This lovely little story is about 10 and 19; unless you plan to lead into a new epic, 90 doesn't have any business here. 10 just promised that her son would never have to compete for attention with the baby, but the baby just kind of stole the last word. Seems contradictory to me.