|Reviews for Growing Pains|
| fandelivres chapter 9 . 7/11/2013
a very good ending:) rather logical, I think. And your characters were all very well depicted:) I don't know why, but omegis reminds me of the witch in Brave, I don't know if you've seen this movie. Well, just for the disappearing tree part, even if they are not the same neither..Well, just waiting for the next story!:)
| Obelisk of Light chapter 9 . 7/10/2013
This is a suspense-filled and intense finale, even though I have mixed feelings about the ending. Nonetheless, you've tied up most loose ends and given us a believable resolution. You've managed to turn a normally hilarious premise into a serious story, which isn't an easy thing to do. Excellent work, my friend!
I think this line is cheesy, "For a moment, Raiden could swear the clawing sensation in his chest was his heart breaking." It seems over-dramatic and unintentionally funny to me.
| Obelisk of Light chapter 8 . 6/11/2013
Whoa, this chapter is pretty tense. Now I'm beginning to suspect you intend to keep Liu as a baby forever. As cute as baby Liu is, that's not a happy ending.
Another face-to-face encounter with Omegis - and a possible showdown - is imminent. I can't see Raiden being patient with Omegis; she's been causing way too much trouble.
| fandelivres chapter 7 . 3/3/2013
a very good chapter waiting for more!
| KitanavsMileena chapter 7 . 3/3/2013
Aw, Raiden's a mother hen! I'm interested to see what he'll do once (if) Liu Kang turns back to normal... Can't wait 'til then! Keep up the great work!
| Obelisk of Light chapter 7 . 3/3/2013
This is a cute chapter. Raiden's protective instincts are in full force here; I think Raiden's feelings overshadow everything else in this chapter. Not that it's a bad thing, it's adorable in its own way. And ... Is Amaya afraid of anything at all? :P
Oh, the end is near? Here's a couple of more things I'd like to see before that happens: another Omegis appearance (whether she meets Kung Lao or even Raiden, I leave it to your muse) and a scene between Raiden and adult Liu. Hopefully with some angst, because I'm a sucker for bonding fics.
| fandelivres chapter 6 . 2/28/2013
good ending with the jokeit seems very raiden like in my opinion:)waiting for more!
| Obelisk of Light chapter 6 . 2/27/2013
Liu and Raiden's interaction in this chapter is terribly cute. Amaya's teasing is much more accurate than either of them would like to admit; Raiden is really good father material.
I like the Kung Lao/Omegis montage; it's really funny, while being short enough not to distract from the earlier cuteness. I cannot wait for their inevitable face-to-face meeting; I think Omegis won't stop flirting with him. (Please make their meeting happen!)
| peeeeeeeeeeeeta chapter 6 . 2/27/2013
I am so glad you uploaded another chapter. And I must say, you never disappoint. I wish you good luck on finding free time.
| fandelivres chapter 5 . 1/21/2013
you've come back!:) it's good, I was really worrying and thinking that this fic would never meet its end. its a very good story! I want to read more of it:)
| Powerglove-MK chapter 1 . 1/20/2013
You're right, Liu Kang does sound like a castrated turkey. so annoying.
| KitanavsMileena chapter 5 . 1/19/2013
Nice little tidbit you added here. Woo boy, that Amaya has balls of steel to stand up to Raiden. I hope they'll find a solution to get baby Liu back to normal soon...
| Obelisk of Light chapter 5 . 1/19/2013
This might be a short chapter, but it's still cute and funny. It's good to know that someone who's not a god, immortal or kombatant still has the guts to call Raiden out on his questionable behaviour. This one chapter gave Amaya a lot of character development.
Baby Liu Kang is still as cute as ever, of course. :3
| fandelivres chapter 4 . 11/5/2012
Yes! Another chapter! And a very good one:)Waiting for more!
| Obelisk of Light chapter 4 . 11/4/2012
Awww! I'm glad to see baby Liu is finally making Raiden into a softie. What was Raiden thinking when he wanted to kill Liu!? Even Dark Raiden wouldn't kill a baby!
I don't mind cheesiness if it's funny or heartwarming. I really want to see a scene between Raiden and adult Liu Kang of the heartwarming variety, no matter how cheesy it is.