Reviews for A Bad Day To Be Late
leiasky chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
Bwahahaha! Wonderful banter. Very reminiscent of the show. Nicely done.
Dark Archer chapter 1 . 12/3/2012
Very well written and nicely captures the feelings Murphy was feeling for the Steele Impostor. The part where you said " she looked so lost that his heart melted" from Murphy's point of view, makes me wonder if Murphy might have had feelings for Laura? That would certainly be interesting to write. Anyway well done on capturing the emotion of the show!
Lauralee63 chapter 1 . 10/11/2012
Absolutely brilliant. Fits like a well tailored glove to the end of that episode.
You write them all so very true to character, especially too who they were and the way they sounded at any given time. They while remaining in essence the same also evolved over time and you capture and use that perfectly.
I think you have a font in your mind called. "their voices". You just get them and understand them so well.
I love the wonderful way you ended it, very clever. So well written.